Fw: Report Ver3 !!! and My comments !!

[Eri Otsuka]

Mina-san,

I transfer senri-san's e-mail received last night.
After this, he send me edited file. So, I will forward the file directly
to your address just after this.

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----- Original Message -----
From: "ql Loke" <senric...@gmail.com>
To: "Eri Otsuka" <ots...@ey-office.com>
Sent: Wednesday, July 22, 2009 12:11 AM
Subject: Re: Report Ver3 !!! and My comments !!

> hey all,
>
> oops i went MIA again cos i have 4 papers to hand in by this week o_O
> I'll read through our report tonight and do something bout the english if
> necessary.
> kikuta-san has already signed on the paper so its ok :)
> i'll grab a bite now and continue on this.
>
> ql
>

[Eri Otsuka]

Senri-san,
Thank you for your great work!

Finally, only two or three items are left.

1. Kikuta-san,
Could you revise appendix 3?
写真に図番号（fig.A3.1みたいな？）とタイトルをつけ、その番号を文章中で
使うことできますか。最初のパラグラフに入りそうな気がします。

2.Katsuki-san,
Could you add something in 3.8 or other main parts and Appendix5?
デザインの検討プロセスを少し書くと、レポートがとてもよくなると思っています。
本文にはさらりと、授業の発表のときの言葉を入れたらいかがでしょう。
Appenndixには、少し多めの画像を入れるとよいのではないかと思います。
やる時間ありますか？

Thank you in advance!!

[Katsuki FUNAKOSHI]

Otsuka-san,

 

Actually it's hard for me to do many thing in this week. That's why i wanted to work hard in last week.

 

But at least I'll put some explanations about design study in 3.8.

While i don't think Appendix5 is necessery because design studies are already shown enough in 3.8.

 

Then I'm gonna send it during today.

 

Best,

 

Katsuki

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[Katsuki FUNAKOSHI]

Otsuka-san,

 

I added some explanations in 3.5 and fig11.

I couldn't understand what you wanted to explain in 3.8 so i just added small sentence about design feed back from user test in 3.7.

Maybe 3.8 is not necessary?

 

Then i changed the colour of texts i wrote so please check them.

 

Best,

 

Katsuki

Eri Otsuka <ots...@ey-office.com> wrote:

[Kikuta Go]

OK Thanks Otsuka-san

I'll do it. but i dont' know tha limitation of this report, so please teach me it..

Thanks

2009/07/22 23:00 Katsuki FUNAKOSHI <katsuob...@yahoo.co.jp>:

[Eri Otsuka]

Kikuta-san,

this report is due on 7/24, it's TOMORROW!
We are waiting for you!!!

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