January NL: proof-read / check this draft plz

[Hisashi Ohara]

Dear newsletter team,

Attached is what I have so far on our January newsletter.

If you can take a look through, at least, the parts you edited, that would be wonderful.

Feedbacks welcomed until 4 a.m. Friday night (or early Sat morning, JST).

Cheers,

Hisashi

[東京大学 阪 茉紘]

Hicchan---:)

Thanks a lot!!!

I think it's nice & easy to read.

Isn't it better that we give thanks message for reading & answering some question of the last NL??

and, team, 

I forget who will make questionary sheet on the web.

Did we deicide that? If someone remember that, pls tell me.....><

Best regards,

Mahiro Saka:)

2012/1/20 Hisashi Ohara <hiss...@hotmail.com>

[Sae Goto]

Mahhy,

Thanks for reminding me! I totally forgot about it!! o_o

I can make it and send it out to everyone. Then we can talk about it during the meeting and make sure it's all set when the newsletter's sent out :)

Sae

2012/1/20 東京大学　　阪　茉紘 <mahir...@gmail.com>

[Hisashi Ohara]

Team,

Is a thank-you message necessary?  

I dont think there needs to be one for reading the NL.

If any, that would be a "thank-you" for answering the questions and this can be at the end of questionnaire on the web.

Any thoughts?

Hisashi

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Date: Fri, 20 Jan 2012 15:28:47 +0900
Subject: Re: January NL: proof-read / check this draft plz
From: sae....@gmail.com
To: pg-ph-ne...@googlegroups.com

[Sae Goto]

hm, maybe a short "Thank you for reading the newsletter. Please remember to answer the online survey!" at the bottom of the last page wouldn't hurt?

What do you guys think?

Sae

2012/1/20 Hisashi Ohara <hiss...@hotmail.com>

[Sae Goto]

Hello team!

The survey draft is done. 

Please log onto Zoomerang and preview "Survey: P&G PH January Newsletter"

username: pg-ph-ne...@googlegroups.com

password: prehire12

Please give me any feedback via email or fb.

Thanks!

Sae

2012/1/20 Sae Goto <sae....@gmail.com>

[Hisashi Ohara]

Yea, if they ever get to the last page... 

I put the HR articles on last 2.5 pages, so this way readers should be reading through the end... unless they skip our articles :P

I'm good with Sae's suggestion.

Hisashi

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Date: Fri, 20 Jan 2012 15:41:34 +0900
Subject: Re: Thank-you message
From: sae....@gmail.com
To: pg-ph-ne...@googlegroups.com

[Hisashi Ohara]

Looks great. 

You might end up making a change on "Mentor or PH" question.

In January's NL, we had inputs from new-hires, so those new-hires might also be potential readers.

We'll ask Kotone-san at the meeting if this is the case.

Hisashi 

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Date: Fri, 20 Jan 2012 15:46:05 +0900

Subject: Re: Thank-you message
From: sae....@gmail.com
To: pg-ph-ne...@googlegroups.com

[東京大学 阪 茉紘]

Sae-chan,

Thank you. I agree with your suggestion:)

Hicchan,

 I think I should explain in detail like Sae-chan's opinion...X( Sorry..

anyway, I can enjoy reading Jan NL. Thank you so much:)

Regards,

Mahiro Saka

2012年1月20日15:48 Hisashi Ohara <hiss...@hotmail.com>:

[Hisashi Ohara]

Here is what the draft looks like now. "Thank you" message is included on the last page.

Also I fixed a couple of other things, which were spotted by Sae.

Hisashi 

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From: hiss...@hotmail.com
To: pg-ph-ne...@googlegroups.com
Subject: RE: Thank-you message
Date: Thu, 19 Jan 2012 22:48:48 -0800

[倉石紗智子]

Hisashi-kun,

Thank you so much for editing the newsletter, and I'm sorry for the late reply...

I think this is really great, having many photos and easy to read:D

Let's talk on next Monday!

（取り急ぎ）

Best regards,
Sachiko Kuraishi

2012年1月20日金曜日 Hisashi Ohara hiss...@hotmail.com:

> Here is what the draft looks like now. "Thank you" message is included on the last page.
> Also I fixed a couple of other things, which were spotted by Sae.
> Hisashi 
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