January NL: proof-read / check this draft plz

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Hisashi Ohara

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Jan 20, 2012, 12:51:16 AM1/20/12
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Dear newsletter team,

Attached is what I have so far on our January newsletter.
If you can take a look through, at least, the parts you edited, that would be wonderful.

Feedbacks welcomed until 4 a.m. Friday night (or early Sat morning, JST).

Cheers,
Hisashi
201201_NL_4.pdf

東京大学  阪 茉紘

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Jan 20, 2012, 1:24:11 AM1/20/12
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Hicchan---:)

Thanks a lot!!!
I think it's nice & easy to read.
Isn't it better that we give thanks message for reading & answering some question of the last NL??

and, team, 
I forget who will make questionary sheet on the web.
Did we deicide that? If someone remember that, pls tell me.....><

Best regards,
Mahiro Saka:)



2012/1/20 Hisashi Ohara <hiss...@hotmail.com>

Sae Goto

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Jan 20, 2012, 1:28:47 AM1/20/12
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Mahhy,

Thanks for reminding me! I totally forgot about it!! o_o
I can make it and send it out to everyone. Then we can talk about it during the meeting and make sure it's all set when the newsletter's sent out :)

Sae

2012/1/20 東京大学  阪 茉紘 <mahir...@gmail.com>

Hisashi Ohara

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Jan 20, 2012, 1:36:40 AM1/20/12
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Team,

Is a thank-you message necessary?  
I dont think there needs to be one for reading the NL.
If any, that would be a "thank-you" for answering the questions and this can be at the end of questionnaire on the web.

Any thoughts?

Hisashi


Date: Fri, 20 Jan 2012 15:28:47 +0900
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Sae Goto

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Jan 20, 2012, 1:41:34 AM1/20/12
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hm, maybe a short "Thank you for reading the newsletter. Please remember to answer the online survey!" at the bottom of the last page wouldn't hurt?

What do you guys think?

Sae

2012/1/20 Hisashi Ohara <hiss...@hotmail.com>

Sae Goto

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Jan 20, 2012, 1:46:05 AM1/20/12
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Hello team!

The survey draft is done. 
Please log onto Zoomerang and preview "Survey: P&G PH January Newsletter"

password: prehire12

Please give me any feedback via email or fb.

Thanks!
Sae

2012/1/20 Sae Goto <sae....@gmail.com>

Hisashi Ohara

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Jan 20, 2012, 1:48:48 AM1/20/12
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Yea, if they ever get to the last page... 
I put the HR articles on last 2.5 pages, so this way readers should be reading through the end... unless they skip our articles :P

I'm good with Sae's suggestion.

Hisashi



Date: Fri, 20 Jan 2012 15:41:34 +0900
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Hisashi Ohara

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Jan 20, 2012, 1:53:17 AM1/20/12
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Looks great. 

You might end up making a change on "Mentor or PH" question.
In January's NL, we had inputs from new-hires, so those new-hires might also be potential readers.

We'll ask Kotone-san at the meeting if this is the case.

Hisashi 



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東京大学  阪 茉紘

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Jan 20, 2012, 1:56:40 AM1/20/12
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Sae-chan,
Thank you. I agree with your suggestion:)

Hicchan,
 I think I should explain in detail like Sae-chan's opinion...X( Sorry..
anyway, I can enjoy reading Jan NL. Thank you so much:)

Regards,
Mahiro Saka


2012年1月20日15:48 Hisashi Ohara <hiss...@hotmail.com>:

Hisashi Ohara

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Jan 20, 2012, 2:11:11 AM1/20/12
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Here is what the draft looks like now. "Thank you" message is included on the last page.
Also I fixed a couple of other things, which were spotted by Sae.

Hisashi 



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Date: Thu, 19 Jan 2012 22:48:48 -0800
201201_NL_5.pdf

倉石紗智子

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Jan 20, 2012, 6:32:15 PM1/20/12
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Hisashi-kun,

Thank you so much for editing the newsletter, and I'm sorry for the late reply...

I think this is really great, having many photos and easy to read:D

Let's talk on next Monday!

(取り急ぎ)

Best regards,
Sachiko Kuraishi

2012年1月20日金曜日 Hisashi Ohara hiss...@hotmail.com:

> Here is what the draft looks like now. "Thank you" message is included on the last page.
> Also I fixed a couple of other things, which were spotted by Sae.
> Hisashi 
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