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I've attached an edited press release with a few minor suggestions.
The information in it is great. I really just rearranged it to flow a
bit differently. The only other suggestion I would have is to tailor
it to each media outlet. It is common to have different versions of
the same press release each time. I would always research the media
outlet I was sending to (print, radio, tv, etc) and the contributors
and editors for each. I would usually read at least 3 of their latest
releases to get a feel for their tone and style. Then I would use
their tone and style as much as possible in my press release to them.
So for instance, the arts writer at the Greenville News liked a
certain focus and tone. If I wrote my press release to sound like
others she'd written she always published it as is. The writer at the
Greenville Business Journal however had a completely different style
and I would write the same release in his "style". It can be
overwhelming to do this for every media outlet and every press
release. If you don't have the resources for that I would choose the
main media outlet you want to focus on (the one most of your viewers
would see or hear from) and just focus on developing a relationship
with them and learning about their style.
I realize this is a generalization but as you know, media
representatives are bombarded with hundreds of press releases a day.
They only publish and respond to the ones that interest them or the
ones where they have a relationship with the organization...and boy do
they like the red carpet treatment :)
My only other suggestion with this is to just pick one audience and
market to them. This release and correct me if I'm wrong, seems to be
targeting both the general public to attend the event and to artists
to submit their work for the event. In general, people won't have the
patience to read through which part of the release that doesn't apply
to them. In addition I would think you'd have different media outlets
that would need to cover each. Lowcountry Indie shorts seems like a
wonderful human interest story in the Lowcountry...which media people
love. The film submissions however seem to need to be marketed to the
arts organizations, educational organizations and the like. Based on
your comments for your main focus I would suggest writing a nice warm,
fuzzy release to a targeted media outlet focusing on the human
interest in the Lowcountry that your organization provides. I'll be
happy to help with that if you think it would be useful.
Anyway, hope this helps! Let me know if you have any questions or if I
can help in any way.
Mary
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