poetry......... tell me how is it...

[Pradyut Bhattacharya]

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duur ekta aagun......
megh kalo hoe keno aajke...
bhristi bhebe ei aagun khokon jabe bhuje....
keno hobe kono mone betha aajke......
keyu ki jaane jibone kobe aashbe alo.....
chand er alo khokhon jaye bhuje ei akashe....
ei duur agun khokhon jabe bhuje....

shundor thakbe eyi jibon shesh kale....
jokhon thakbe na kono mone betha......
kothau jabar thakbe na jokhon mone kone icha....
jibon ar mon shob jabe hariye....
kichu moner icha jokhone dukhku debe.....
kichu shriti bhalo beshe jabe....

aasho brishti
dure ekta aagun bujhiye dao...
jibon jao phuriye....
ami ei basha chede...
bhiji ektu brisjti te...
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reply me how was it.....

thanks...

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