Sorry everyone, I was away from my computer and communication yesterday so this will have to be a mass response to everything that was mentioned:
Jane: Cheers for offering to do that, my details are:
Oliver Smith
Dominique: That was fantastically speedy! I was wondering two things:
1. Would it be possible to have George give a cheesy smile as he cycles off at the end, just to get across the idea that he's been made very happy.
2. I'm not sure that the perspective change for the rain works too well as an animation, but I'd be interested in hearing what anyone else thinks too.
Thomas:
I see what you mean about whether it helps for everyone to build it, it was really just as a direct, more realistic, replacement for the 'pop-up' idea but the whole idea of transportability can be left out altogether if needs be.
For the movement/visualisation I showed this as an example (apologies for the compression):