GEORGE 2 ANIMATION!!

[Dominique Bongers]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0WZEXIcE6u4
 
based on the suggestions of Gus, Ed & Ollie, i altered some things to the animation & added some sound (didn't do much with the sound yet, as i is waiting for narration).
entered also some new shots (based on a later storyboard) - so feedback please!

got some sounds but still waiting for the narration...
don't know if the city sound scape is necassery if we've got a voiceover...
and is thinking that we still need some other follie sounds (bus/metro, embrella, prop guys, etc).

another problem i am facing; is every shot necassery?
can't judge anything at the moment cause no idea how quick/slow narration is... or are shots taking too long or too short ...
 
and if people would like to see other alterations, please let me know!!
 
yes, altered background, i tried one with a cityscape - which was quite busy (to see please check enclosure)
if people would like to take the challenge in providing a better background (cityscape):  768x567 - square pixels, tiff!
 
please just judge it for yourself and give me feedback!! please!!

 
Greets
 
Dominique

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[Dominique Bongers]

great... my computer just decided to break down and i lost the last AfterEffects file...

so i've got to redo some of it.

 

ahhh the lovely world of animation - you've gotta love it....

 

 

2010/11/8 Dominique Bongers <dominiqu...@gmail.com>

[Dominique Bongers]

oke, to give heads up - don't have the street background (dark above, grey under) and the rain shot (so drops falling down, and tilting the scene)

my question to you guys; did it work or not?

 

my opinion: it didn't! at least not the way i tried it... so new suggestions on this matter please!

 

greets

 

Dominique

 

 

2010/11/8 Dominique Bongers <dominiqu...@gmail.com>

[Edward Lawrenson]

Hi Dominique,
 
Can I just say, I think the animation is great. It's short, simple and with the right narration it will make perfect sense. I am going to record the narration today according to Olly's splendid script. I will get that sent to you ASAP so, put your feet up until then!
 
Thanks guys. Great work.

Ed
 

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Date: Mon, 8 Nov 2010 02:39:47 +0000
Subject: Re: GEORGE 2 ANIMATION!!
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