FINAL REPORT (FINAL)

[Chao Rong Koh]

Hey Team,

Please find attached for the FINAL REPORT, PDF Version.

Do spend some time to look through it, and let me know if you spot any mistakes and I will edit the word document accordingly.

I need another pair of eyes to help me look through the content page and make sure the pages stated are accurate. I scanned through a couple of times already, but I will like some confirmation.

The final cut off time for any changes is 10pm TONIGHT, thereafter, Carol will begin printing it. SO PLEASE, spend some time to look through it!

Thanks!!!

Regards,

Chao

[Yue Zhou]

Nice work Chao!

It looks good to me!

-Yue

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[Chao Rong Koh]

Hey All,

I spotted some formatting error in the Content Page. Here is the UPDATED version! :)

Regards,

Chao

[Alexander Athanasios Andonyadis]

Hey team,
I think our appendix should be more consistent. We have to use pseudo codes (not raw executable).
Alex

[Carol Tyger]

I can agree with that. The formatting is very different for the two. 

Is it possible to make them look more similar?

[Carol Tyger]

Also, in our appendix it might make more sense to have Delve first, and then FreshDirect since that is the order it appeared in our report. 

[Carol Tyger]

"Delve is a social newsreader that provides professionals and THE enterprise personalized news aggregation"

I think that THE is a little awkward here. Should it just say enterprise?

[Alexander Athanasios Andonyadis]

For example we are using the Lu, Chu et al pseudo code, then a flow pseudo code for data clearing  but then we use a raw executable code (not pseudo code) for ML.
Alex

On Wed, Apr 24, 2013 at 9:33 PM, Alexander Athanasios Andonyadis <aaa...@columbia.edu> wrote:

[Carol Tyger]

professionals and enterprises sounds best... I think .. :)

[Takehiro Iwama]

Chao, guys

 

Position of third and fourth level of title such as 2.2.4 and 3.3.2.1 are not constant, please check it.

 

Takehiro

[Helen Ming Chen]

Hi Chao & Team,

Great great work!! Here're two feedbacks.

First, I think some variables expressions in the two equations for the MR model on page 21 and 23 are strange. For example, in "total units", "units" is the subscript of "total". At my first glance, I could only notice "total" without "units". However, "units" is something important to show what exactly is the dependent variable. The same applies to "regular price" where I could only notice regular. It also create a consistency problem with another regression equation on page 35 where we use "PP" instead of "PP factor", "Discount" instead of "Discount factor". Although the equations are for different use, we'd better utilize the name of same variable.

Second, the screenshot picture for dynamic input model and event study model is not quite clear after being enlarged. I took better pictures in the attachment. Chao, could you please update them?

Thanks team!

Best,

Helen

Helen Ming Chen

MS in Management Science & Engineering

Department of Industrial Engineering & Operations Research

Columbia University

mc3...@columbia.edu

(646) 712-0806

[Yue Zhou]

Hey Chao, 

Sorry for the late reply. I think it is great work too! I have read the report thoroughly and am convinced with Nick and yours editing. The only thing I want to bring to your attention is that some text has a different color, but probably that will not be an issue when we print the document out.

Best,

Yue