I have 2 minor suggestions. Could the word "local" be put in the second
slide. ...opportunity for local women...so no one thinks we hired actors or
advocates.
Also the slide near the end that begins with "After my daughter was born"
advances too quickly so I could not read all the words in the time allowed.
Otherwise it is perfect in my eyes.
Love the song!
Ruth
And the slide that begins with
I just, just got your dropped-off CD to work. I had to install a program to
watch it with since it was created with a Mac (?). Anyways...well done. My
version didn't advance on it's own and I didn't have music playing, but
after reading Ruth's review..I had a look at the Youtube version and see all
those things are in working order.
Also I see the typo errors on the CD version have been fixed up. What a
great song!
This is really good. Both the Red Tent committee and anyone in power
positions viewing it here (IHA, KGH) will get a clear, concise message that
The Red Tent Event is about voices telling their stories en route to change
for the better.
Terra
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