Thank you Cory for your input.
Thank you Jack for your concerns on Governance.
I reacted to your feedback by adding a Readme box in the text to make more clear the main idea thread. You can take it from here and remix it into something shorter and better written.
You can start a new version of the text in the same doc, below the original one, you can add comments / suggestions, etc.
NOTE: please replay to all if you want to add something in this email thread, so that others can also build on your ideas.