It notice that we never define the area we cover in the letter, and
this might be worth doing.
I suggest doing that here, inserting the word in caps.
The mission statement of the consortium states that our initial
interest is: “to provide online access to specimen data housed in
member institutions, with particular emphasis on collections from the
region,” WHICH EXTENDS FROM NEW JERSEY AND PENNSYLVANIA NORTH AND
FROM ONTARIO WEST.
bob