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Praveen S

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Jul 11, 2006, 3:03:44 AM7/11/06
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Hi all,
         Even I had mailed to the mailer but that doesnt seem to be working. Well, I am attaching the poster that I have prepared for Sahana's fundraising campaign. Please review the same. The second page of the file, however calls volunteers for Mukta. That could be added or deleted later on.

Thanks and regards,
Praveen

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Dixit

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Jul 11, 2006, 3:08:32 AM7/11/06
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 HI Praveen,

Its gud....
Regards
Dixit
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Loki

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Jul 11, 2006, 3:12:48 AM7/11/06
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Hey praveen,
 its pretty interesting one ....
 
 
 
Thnx,
Loki

 
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Vasantha Setty

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Jul 11, 2006, 3:23:04 AM7/11/06
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Hi,

The AD on the second page

“Mukta Foundation, a non profit and moneyless organization which helps NGOs through collaborative actions and networking is looking out for volunteers. For exciting volunteering opportunities at Mukta Foundation”

Here the word “moneyless” can be replaced by a better word, say for e.g “self-sustaining”

 

They can’t pick up a book from a bookstore like you did just now.

The AD on this first page gives more of negative meaning implying “blind people are helpless”

 

we need to change this sentence

For e.g “they also can read the books as u can Please help blind readers get Braille books”

 

What do u say

 

Regards

vasantha


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Subject: [Mukta:348] Braille AD

 

Hi all,
         Even I had mailed to the mailer but that doesnt seem to be working. Well, I am attaching the poster that I have prepared for Sahana's fundraising campaign. Please review the same. The second page of the file, however calls volunteers for Mukta. That could be added or deleted later on.

Thanks and regards,
Praveen


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Maria Pinto

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Jul 11, 2006, 3:24:31 AM7/11/06
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Hi praveen,
 
Its a good Ad. great job :-)
Do we also mention about Sahana,maybe their website etc... so ppl reading can know about the institution for the blind too. I donot know whether this is feasible. Just a suggestion.
As discussed in the meet,we dont need more volunteers right. So, as you have written that can be done away with?
 
Regards,
maria
 

Praveen S

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Jul 11, 2006, 3:34:10 AM7/11/06
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Hi Vasantha and Maria,
               Thanks a lot for your suggestions. Vasantha, you are right. I will try to come up with catchy words that don't bring out a negative sense. But believe me, blind people are really helpless when it comes to books. They simply don't get hold of books and they struggle hard to source them. The meaning implied here is "They don't have bookstores like we have for us". So let us think how we can improve upon this.
                Yes, Maria as of now we don't need volunteers. But that's just a poster which was done sometime ago. If we have the poster ready, we can publish it, whenever we require more volunteers.

Thanks and regards,
Praveen
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