Final EITI presentation slides on google drive

[Harry Li]

Hello Team

Hope all is well.

I have uploaded the EITI presentation PPT used in Mongolia

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B_2z3o3VNKgQdXZrOVlVaGJBa00 

Sincerely,

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[Carlos da Costa]

Guys,

Great job on the presentation! If it's OK, I made some slight changes to it where I felt it was appropriate (see: EITI PRESENTATION FINAL  v.2). One quick query - the slides in its appendix seem to be a duplicate of what's found in the actual presentation.

Also, is there still a plan to create a sticker of sort? If so, please check out the attachment that they gave out at this year's CIM AGM in Montreal. It might give you some ideas.

Thanks,

Carlos

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Date: Tue, 12 May 2015 15:42:18 -0700
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[Dierkes, Julian]

Dear EITI Gang,

I hope that those of you who went to Mongolia are taking the chance to update others in the EITI project on your experience.

Can I suggest that we make the PPTs available on Slideshare or some similar service so that we can a) share it easily with EITI Mongolia, and b) be able to link to it in blog posts, etc.?

Can I also urge those of you who went to Mongolia to consult with others in the team on some kind of summary document (ideally with photos, links to the presentation, etc.) that documents the project?

Finally, while I saw the presentations in Ulaanbaatar, did the paper and policy groups submit a final document to Dr. van Zyl and myself that I somehow missed in the email traffic?

Cheers,
Julian Dierkes

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[jonathan...@alumni.ubc.ca]

Hey gang, 

The final paper, as far as i know, is still being edited. We will get it to Dr. Dierkes and Dr. Van Zyl asap.

The slides are on google drive (the Mongolia literature drive) but we can make it available on slide share as well. As for changes, it won't make a difference for the presentations which are all over, but feel free to make changes if you like. The appendix was duplicating presentation slides because we needed to show those duplicates during question period. 

Hope this answers the questions. Now back to editing.

Jon

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[Carlos da Costa]

Hi all,

I'm lending some assistance to Maïa with the paper and for the bibliography can you send us the references that you used for your part of it?

For your reference enclosed is the updated copy of the paper.

Thanks,
Carlos

[Bérangère Maïa Parizeau]

Hi all!  

The paper is finished and in my opinion it is a successful group research paper. I am exhausted and will not finish the bibliography tonight but I think we have all the references.

If someone wants to finish the bibliography and look at the body of the text one more time before we submit it that would be fine. I will probably take another day to refine the flow of the last two sections...but they are generally working fine.

I will be finishing this up when I am back from the Gobi desert in 3 days.

Peace, Maïa

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[Carlos da Costa]

Hello!

From sunny Vancouver... Well, no really sunny...

Unless someone else has already dealt with it I'll take care of the bibliography and a few other matters right now. If someone(s) can have a read through the entire paper again (I reviewed it once yesterday) after I resubmit it to you that would be great.

Maïa can then finalize it all afterwards and before we submit it for review let's all have a read through it just in case we missed something.

Thanks,
Carlos

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Date: Sun, 24 May 2015 18:41:05 +0800
Subject: Re: Bibliography Details Required - EITI Paper
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[Bérangère Maïa Parizeau]

Justin had asked me to do something...I did not have a chance to read through his email....so there is that that needs to be done...whatever that is.

I am off to the Gobi for three days.

:)

On Mon, May 25, 2015 at 1:18 AM, Bérangère Maïa Parizeau <nei...@gmail.com> wrote:

Justin had asked me to do something...I did not have a chance to read through his email....so there is that that needs to be done...whatever that is.

I am off to the Gobi.

tata!

:)

Maïa

[Bulgan Batdorj]

Maia,

Looks as if you could live there forever :)

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[Carlos da Costa]

Hi all,

A couple of items that I need your assistance with:

First, let me know if I inadvertently missed anyone who contributed with the paper:

   Bulgan Batdorj
   Jonathan Brasnett
   Carlos da Costa
   Jocelyn Fraser
   Justin Kwan
   Harry (Yixiang) Li
   Bérangère Maïa Nathasha Parizeau
   Christina Toepell

Secondly, can everyone who included footnote entries please send me each completed MLA reference (http://www.easybib.com/reference/guide/mla/essay) so they can all be included within the bibliography (please have a look at all the footnotes). Please see attachment for the latest version of our paper.

Once it's all taken care of if someone(s) can review the paper once more before Maïa reviews it for the last time that would be great.

Thanks,
Carlos

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[Stephanie Zimmerling]

Hi All! 

Hope everyone had a wonderful time in Mongolia! I'm very jealous and wish I could have joined.

I'm happy to give the paper a full read through tomorrow morning. I will track changes (if any) and merge them into the final footnote-edited copy once it is available. 

Hope everyone is enjoying the summer! 

Stephanie

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[Carlos da Costa]

Hi Stephanie,
 
I knew I was missing someone... I'm really sorry... Please find enclosed the latest version of the paper with your name include.
 
Again, a couple of items that I need people's assistance with:

First, let me know if I inadvertently missed anyone who contributed with the paper:

   Bulgan Batdorj
   Jonathan Brasnett
   Carlos da Costa
   Jocelyn Fraser
   Justin Kwan
   Harry (Yixiang) Li
   Bérangère Maïa Nathasha Parizeau
   Christina Toepell

   Stephanie Zimmerling

Secondly, can everyone who included footnote entries please send me each completed MLA reference (http://www.easybib.com/reference/guide/mla/essay) so they can all be included within the bibliography (please have a look at all the footnotes). Please see attachment for the latest version of our paper.

Once it's all taken care of if someone(s) can review the paper once more before Maïa reviews it for the last time that would be great.

Thanks,
Carlos

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[Carlos da Costa]

I know I accidentally missed a few names - my sincere apologies for doing so. Can someone please send me the remaining names and we'll add them to the list?
 
This is who I have so far:

 
   Bulgan Batdorj
   Jonathan Brasnett
   Carlos da Costa
   Jocelyn Fraser
   Justin Kwan
   Harry (Yixiang) Li
   Bérangère Maïa Nathasha Parizeau
   Christina Toepell
   Stephanie Zimmerling
 
Secondly, can everyone who included footnote entries please send me each completed MLA reference (http://www.easybib.com/reference/guide/mla/essay) so they can all be included within the bibliography (please have a look at all the footnotes). Please see attachment for the latest version of our paper.

Once it's all taken care of if someone(s) can review the paper once more before Maïa reviews it for the last time that would be great.

Thanks,
Carlos
 

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Date: Sun, 24 May 2015 15:52:36 -0700

[Lotus Ruan]

Hi Carlos,

This should be the complete list: http://blogs.ubc.ca/maapps/about-the-team/ 

Thanks for compiling the file :)

Cheers,

Lotus

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[Carlos da Costa]

Many thanks, Lotus! I think I've included everyone (see attachment). Sorry for all the emails.... That said, if I have missed one do let me know (see attachment). Thx.

Secondly, can everyone who included footnote entries please send me each completed MLA reference (http://www.easybib.com/reference/guide/mla/essay) so they can all be included within the bibliography (please have a look at all the footnotes). Please see attachment for the latest version of our paper.

Once it's all taken care of if someone(s) can review the paper once more before Maïa reviews it for the last time that would be great.

Thanks, Stephanie - if you could have a read through it that would be great!

Thanks,

Carlos

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[Stephanie Zimmerling]

Looks great everyone! Really good job overall. I went ahead and changed all the outstanding footnotes that needed proper referencing because there were only a few. 

I've tracked changes in the attached doc. One change I've made is the title now reads "Sub-National" rather than Subnational. All subsequent subtitles read "Sub-National" rather than "Sub-national". Hopefully I'm not messing everything up but this seems to be consistent with all articles related to 'Sub-National Reporting". If you had already decided to go ahead with the other version - delete my changes. No biggie! The title should definitely be changed though. 

There were also a couple cases of 'we' and 'our' - I don't think personal pronouns should be used in this type of paper. Correct me if I'm wrong. 

I've included 'Figure' labels at the top of each figure and made reference to the figures in each of the appropriate sections. I think this helps the reader related graphics to text. Once again please delete my corrections if preference was to have Figure below the graphic. 

I'm not clear as to why the graphs are grey-toned?

I've made a few more significant edits in the Conclusion. Some sentences were long or didn't make sense to me. I'm not sure we can say "indigenous communities across the world have been decimated" (pg. 14) without a source.... I've edited it. 

I'm a bit confused as to the use of a Bibliography and footnotes....which sources are included in the Bibliography and which are included in the footnotes?

Maia if you need help ironing out these last details let me know. I'm happy to assist!

Awesome work!!!

Stephanie

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[justi...@alumni.ubc.ca]

Hi Everyone,

I am going to go over the paper now to fix up some of the graphs and have a good thorough read of the essay. 

Before I do, I noticed that the version that Carlos sent is different from the May-24-15 version that Maia sent previously...some additional parts are missing from the version that Stephanie just edited and there are parts that are quite different. 

It seems like there are two versions that have been edited simultaneously with corrections that are unique to each (even before Stephanie's edits). Not sure how we would like to proceed...or if anyone knows which one is more updated and I can use that one continuing on.

Best,

Justin 

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[Stephanie Zimmerling]

Hmmm that's too bad! If someone is able to let me know which version is most up to date I am happy to merge my comments into the newer version. Maia - can you confirm the document we should be editing? I likely won't be able to get to this until tomorrow so Justin if you want to go ahead and read through which ever version Maia confirms, I can add my edits tomorrow. 

Thanks!!!

Stephanie 

[Carlos da Costa]

Guys,

The one that I edited was the latest version that Maïa had sent me and so let's use the one that Stephanie just worked on since it should be the most updated copy of it.

Thanks,
Carlos

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Date: Mon, 25 May 2015 14:21:57 -0400

Subject: Re: Bibliography Details Required - EITI Paper

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[justi...@alumni.ubc.ca]

Hello Everyone,

I merged the two documents together, incorporating the section on Engaging Civil Society at a Subnational Level that was left out. I've since updated the document that Stephanie worked on. My citations have also been footnoted and added to the bibliography. Track-changed my comments as well. I found it is good to edit in track changes and then read it as Final (without showing the markup) which you can access in the Review section. That way you can read the whole essay but switch back and view the edits if necessary.

I went back and fixed the graphs and included the other ones that were deleted. I like Stephanie's suggestion with the figure number on top and so I updated all of those now with the 6 images. I've also updated the headings (in bold) and subheadings (in regular text) so that we can see clearly the different sections of the essay. Also reformatted the abstract but we can change this if nobody likes it. 

Not too many things to change since Stephanie did a good and thorough edit. A few fact checks and some minor things I've noted in the comments. Some in-text citations need to be switched to footnote format though. 

I think the last 3 paragraphs in the conclusion are really interesting and read quite well after Stephanie's edits. I’m not sure however how we can draw connections about nomadic life and ecological sustainability from the 13 case study country analysis in the conclusion of our essay.  I think this reads more as an “impact” section versus a conclusion and could very well be an entire paper of its own. Not sure we should introduce a lot of new ideas in the conclusion of the paper. Thinking about our readers (Julian and Dirk) and how they will mark this, I'm worried they might question the relevance of this to subnational reporting since that was the main topic of the class and this essay. Just some food for thought - I will go with whatever the group decides though.

Overall, I think we did a great job putting together all of the information and making a good impact on the subnational reporting literature.

Cheers,

Justin 

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[Carlos da Costa]

It looks good! 

I think it's worth having one more pair of eyes review it before we hand it off to Maïa. After she's done looking at it also we'll all review it for possibly the last time unless someone(s) finds something of concern. 

We'll then submit it to Juliane and Dirk. What do you think?

Thanks,

Carlos

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[Jocelyn Fraser]

Hi Everyone,

Thanks for the opportunity to review the paper.  Given my schedule, first with my comprehensive exam and then with two of my own conference papers, I haven't made a  contribution to the work and would feel better if you took my name off the author’s list.  It doesn't feel right to me to take credit when the work has been done by others.  I am listed on the presentation materials, and am happy to remain there.

I will hope to see the final article in print somewhere soon!

Best regards,

Jocelyn

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[Jocelyn Fraser]

Hi Everyone,

My editorial comments on the paper are included -- using track change -- on the attached.

I would like to flag two observations that may prompt some discussion.

1. We are currently using both footnotes and MLA references.  I suggest we standardize the citation style to use one style throughout the paper.
2. There are many interesting observation within the paper.  Some are not directly tied to our research or methodology.  As our task was to investigate EITI member countries readiness to implement SNR, I suggest we focus the paper on the research findings.  This is not to diminish the importance of a discussion of degradation of the environment, climate change, erosion of traditional lifestyle or questions of sustainability.  These are critically important topics which could constitute a separate, perhaps complimentary, paper.  However, I question broadening the scope of the paper to address these issues when our research assignment and methodology was limited to effective SNR process implementation.

[Carlos da Costa]

Hi Jocelyn,

Very good points, and thanks again for your insights! 

At this stage let's leave it in Maïa's capable hands (unless someone wishes to add to Jocelyn's comments / observations).

Cheers,

Carlos

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[Bérangère Maïa Parizeau]

Thanks Carlos.