Hi Kanchan,
The border of the pages seems abnormally thick. The idea of giving a border with pictures in it is good. But it can be cut out more nicely.
Specifically speaking the border eats up 3/4th of magazine, which projects little hurried packing.
Else cover and all is creatively done, and previous editions were very good. This time also the work is good, just a small hiccup. I feel if you take peer feedback, surely such small misses can be taken care of.
I know it takes a lot of hard work for this output, and so it was just an internal feedback for improvement. Team must take it positively.
Keep up the good work,
Premanshu