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Rachel Cross

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Nov 28, 2011, 12:20:20 AM11/28/11
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Hey Group,
I'm going to send Korrie what I have so far for the paper at midnight so if you are going to send me your paper section please do it now. Thanks.

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Rachel Cross
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M.A. Advertising I Account Planning


Pilar Perez

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Nov 28, 2011, 1:01:30 AM11/28/11
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Here's mine.
NDOT sect 1 Pilar

Rachel Cross

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Nov 28, 2011, 1:06:37 AM11/28/11
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Thanks pilar

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> <NDOT sect 1 Pilar>

Kyle Leavitt

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Nov 28, 2011, 3:13:03 AM11/28/11
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NDOTproblems.docx

Korrie Browning

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Nov 30, 2011, 6:21:56 PM11/30/11
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Please take the time to read through this TONIGHT (Wednesday) as I will be turning it in tomorrow (Thursday). If you find any typos then place identify the page # that it is on & the first few words of the paragraph that it is in. You are not only responsible for your section, but actually read everyone else's.

NDOT Case Study-FINAL.docx

Jerret Swierc

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Dec 1, 2011, 11:46:24 AM12/1/11
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page 18. first paragragh. add "schedule" after the word pulsing.

On Wed, Nov 30, 2011 at 5:21 PM, Korrie Browning <korrie....@gmail.com> wrote:
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Please take the time to read through this TONIGHT (Wednesday) as I will be turning it in tomorrow (Thursday). If you find any typos then place identify the page # that it is on & the first few words of the paragraph that it is in. You are not only responsible for your section, but actually read everyone else's.








Thanks!
Korrie

Korrie Browning

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Dec 1, 2011, 11:47:05 AM12/1/11
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I will assume by the silence that we really are that brilliant and that this paper is a spotless reflection of our combined intelligence.

I'll be submitting it this afternoon!

-korrie

Jerret Swierc

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Dec 1, 2011, 11:50:25 AM12/1/11
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The Nevada Quickfacts citation is on there twice (I think me and Kyle both used it) but it is the same one.

Rachel Cross

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Dec 1, 2011, 11:51:39 AM12/1/11
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I honestly haven't had time to read over it so I hope it's as perfect as we think...

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Jerret Swierc

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Dec 1, 2011, 11:54:51 AM12/1/11
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page 14. second paragraph. The 2nd (FARS Encyclopedia) citation just needs the period to be moved after.

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Dec 1, 2011, 1:46:41 PM12/1/11
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P17- 3rd paragraph--"phone" needs to be capitalized and the 'S' needs to be removed. And "campaign" needs an apostrophe/make it possessive

Same paragraph, few lines down-- Remove the "to" just after "people age 25 and under"
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