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k.o.lu...@rdg.ac.uk

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Oct 16, 2007, 5:14:50 AM10/16/07
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Could you guys have a look on this beta presentation. It is a 20min
(low tech) presentation here at ePortfolio 2007.

Do you have an suggestions?

Cheers
Karsten

Pat Parslow

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Oct 16, 2007, 5:26:57 AM10/16/07
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:-)

Should Rob be on the title page?
Probably want to change the copyright to 2007 (on first and last slide)
Spare 'e' on the end of connectivism


It works for me - amazingly, I can actually hear you presenting it as I read
the slides, which tends to be a good sign!

Just wondering whether you want to draw a parallel between a view of the
e-Identity and the ePortfolio, in case the audience doesn't 'get it'?

Pat

Karsten Oster Lundqvist

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Oct 16, 2007, 5:51:52 AM10/16/07
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good idea to spell it out, I'll add it ;-)

Rob isn't on because we submitted before he came. I'll add him to the slides tough


Cheers
Karsten

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Shirley Williams

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Oct 16, 2007, 6:26:30 AM10/16/07
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Looks good.

Agree add Rob - watch the line break in names.

Do you want to put the logo on all white slides?

Slide 4 check spelling of connectivism
Slide 6 - acknowledge George Siemens by name

Like Slide 7 - maybe say "Now funded by JISC" maybe a JISC link?

I think at the end a slide saying:
Where are we now, and what is to happen next.

- We have a prototype that is due to be trialled with users next month,
- From their we are engaged in incremental development

- Open Source - input welcome.


Shirley

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Karsten Oster Lundqvist

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Oct 16, 2007, 6:54:25 AM10/16/07
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Thanks, changes done

I've uploaded the new presentation...


Cheers
Karsten

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Shirley Williams

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Oct 16, 2007, 10:47:27 AM10/16/07
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Ok looks good

 

The copyright notice (probably on the Master slides0 says 2006 – can you update.

Closing bracket missing second dash on slide 3.

 

 

Shirley

 


Karsten Oster Lundqvist

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Oct 16, 2007, 12:13:13 PM10/16/07
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done

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Ok looks good

The copyright notice (probably on the Master slides0 says 2006 - can you update.

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k.o.lu...@rdg.ac.uk

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Oct 24, 2007, 6:06:11 AM10/24/07
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And I've now add the final version of the presentation...

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