Portfolio update 2 - Critique Welcome

[Daniel Hall]

Kick2 is my updated one. I took out the fall from the first one because it was part of the reference I had and fit in with a story that only I understood. So instead I took it out and blocked out a kick, then sigh, then tired collapse, then facepalm. It's still blocky because I just fleshed it out.

Let me know if its a good idea and should continue on with it or if I'm kidding myself. Also anything that doesn't look right or is to quick etc let me know :)

[zac choo]

the poses look good (kick, land, sit). just polish it up and you're good to go :)

for the victim taking the kick, a suggestion maybe... make him roll around in pain or something?

also, from the landing pose to the sitting pose, something looks not right, like the hips are pivoting from the legs into a sitting posture. somehow when i try to act out the pose in sequence myself, it seems i'm putting a lot of effort getting into that sitting position. suggestion: try a different action or make him tumble to his side instead?

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Date: Fri, 4 May 2012 00:45:03 +0930

[Josh Whitkin]

Great Daniel.  You’ve fixed the story problem. This updated animation makes sense as a standalone story now.

 

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Kick2 is my updated one. I took out the fall from the first one because it was part of the reference I had and fit in with a story that only I understood. So instead I took it out and blocked out a kick, then sigh, then tired collapse, then facepalm. It's still blocky because I just fleshed it out.