Discussion on group-5-dana-sharlene-faustin-daniel-adam-matt

[marisa]

for some reason when I was reading this I thought of peter pan!!
Your title is perfect!!
I like the order of the statements..it flows very nicely :)
great job guys!!

[Antonio Fernandez]

I really liked this poem. It made me think of my life and how taking
risks or making changes will be good. Overall, this poem was well
written. I would have to say that the fourth line is my favourite
because it basically says that we need to take a step back and enjoy
everything. Again, this was a job well done.

[Andrew Viet]

"I wish to dream a dream of wishing." Whaaaaaaat? Ahah, I like this
poem, it's really general to everybody. I think this was the only poem
with a line going from good to bad: "I used to be cautious, but now I
am careless," I think the line is more powerful like that when you
state a mistake. Yeahhh, it's a sick poem! But Saig explain to me the
last line...I don't get it. :S

On Mar 9, 6:12 pm, Antonio Fernandez

[Nicole Burello]

Awesome!! This poem definitely displays an adventurous, wreckless (in
a good way), free, different feel to it.
The poem speaks to me about having dreams, dreaming big, adventures,
living without boarders & boundaries, imagination and being/ thinking
different. Such an awesome theme/ meaning!!
I love the thought provoking side to it. When I was reading it, I was
able to imagine my dreams, my wishes, and lovely images that popped
into my head.
I think the poem was put together amazing!!
Good job guys!! :)

[Ms. Mauricio]

I'd like to hear from all of you how you interpret the last line - and
then we can hear from the writers to get their perspective. Creative
piece group - well done!

[Chris]

The poem, for me, seems to vary among the lines talking about
different stages of our lives. Not sure if it was suppose to be like
this but I like the metaphor in the “I wish I could fly and see
everything with a different eye.” It is hard to see things in a
different perspective sometimes especially when we’re part of one
side, in which case we might be stubborn to see a different view of
how we see it. And it rhymed so maybe some thought went into this? As
for the last line of how I interpret it, I got the idea of the
twilight zone (never seen the movie though). Like an alternate reality
where everybody has these wishes for different things that can help
mankind such as world peace or no poverty and that together everybody
can work together to make it happen. Hopefully that wasn’t too corny
or anything…

[Lee Odish]

"I used to feel alone and unaccepted, but now I feel loved, which
comes with a sense of belonging."
- Love it.
Great job guys!

[Andre]

This is another great poem. I love the title of the poem. I understand
this poem and i like it alot. The only line I don't understand is "I
wish to dream a dream of wishing". What does that mean? Great job on
this poem guys.

[vinn...@hotmail.com]

andrea:)
Great poem that really shows how people can change, this shows the
change for the better and how everyone is different. It's really cool
to see how different people in the group almost have the same ideas
going on.

"I wish to dream a dream of wishing"

Great sentence, in the right place !

[Cass]

This poem is really good guys theres some lines that are amazing....
like the one "I used to feel alone and unaccepted, but now I feel

loved, which
comes with a sense of belonging."

Good jobb keep up the amazing workk!!!

[James]

Dana there isn'r anything about death? All in all this is a good poem

[Cathy Mai]

My favourite line from this poem is "I used to feel alone and

unaccepted, but now I feel loved, which comes with a sense of

belonging." Overall it's a pretty decent poem.