Renhai Reflections (269): Ups and Downs

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Ups and Downs
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

First warm day —
his tongue round and round
an ice-cream cone. /jt

Ripples on snow-melt puddles — /vs
an icicle disappears. /jt

Riding up
toward Eiffel's top —
warm breeze. /vs

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