Renhai Reflections (283): Fast Reactions
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Aug 28, 2011, 11:16:04 PM8/28/11
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A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)
Bursts of fireworks —
quick flashes illuminate
people in the crowd. /vs
In the night, cracks of thunder — /vs
her boyfriend storms out red-faced. /zh.r
Contemplating
a nudist Black-Sea beach —
your joke cracks me up. /zh.r
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0283.htm
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A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)
Bursts of fireworks —
quick flashes illuminate
people in the crowd. /vs
In the night, cracks of thunder — /vs
her boyfriend storms out red-faced. /zh.r
Contemplating
a nudist Black-Sea beach —
your joke cracks me up. /zh.r
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0283.htm
_______________________________________
Masago Blog:
http://masago-no-haiku.blogspot.com/
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