Renhai Reflections (266): Slowly, Surely

[Masago]

Slowly, Surely
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

After ten minutes
I leave the tanning bed —
white-circled eyes. /jt

Ripples on snow-melt puddles — /vs
the roof soaks up the sun. /jt

I start to doze off
in the bubbling hot tub —
page twenty-five... /vs

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[This renhai is the third in a six-part series... check the notes for
details.]
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