Renhai Reflections (273): A Gift

1 view
Skip to first unread message

Masago

unread,
May 8, 2011, 10:36:25 AM5/8/11
to Masago
A Gift
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

Big hugs with
tears of joy after months
of hard effort. /vs

The tiny sparrow leaves a gift — /vs
overhead a quick cloud burst. /jt

A chick hatches
on the twenty-second day
amid the feathers. /jt

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0273.htm
_______________________________________
Masago Blog:
http://masago-no-haiku.blogspot.com/

Masago

unread,
May 8, 2011, 10:36:35 AM5/8/11
to Masago
A Gift
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

Big hugs with
tears of joy after months
of hard effort. /vs

The tiny sparrow leaves a gift — /vs
overhead a quick cloud burst. /jt

A chick hatches
on the twenty-second day
amid the feathers. /jt

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0273.htm

[This is a variation of renhai that has never been done before. See
the notes for details.]
Reply all
Reply to author
Forward
0 new messages