Renhai Reflections (277): Advancing Further

[Masago]

Advancing Further
A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

clinched waistline
of the bachacs busy at
moving small sticks /gc

under a shady tree, benches — /gc
the bride's veil lifts in the breeze /vs

voices ring out,
a banner lifted high:
"Higher Wages!" /vs

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