Referencing for Business Plan Part 1

[ottopangestu]

Hi guys,
regarding of what Bob said on today's lecture and as I already discussed with Mario, Hernan, and Andres, we might put more references on our assignment to avoid plagiarism since he will deduct 2 marks if he can find any plagiarism within the assignment.
so here is my recommendation for some references needed:

1. we need to have references for the picture on our cover. (Diego, can you find the reference for this pic since you're the one who found it if im not wrong)
2. im not sure if you guys wanna put references for pictures on page 10 (Andres' part), dunno if this is necessary
3. we should put references for the table of risk level on page 24
         http://acumen-training.org/cieh_level_3_award_in_risk_assessment_principles_and_practice.html for the first table, but i cant find for the 2nd table. Both are from Bob's slide but he referenced it from acumen-training.org

and some of the changes are highlighted on the attached documents (i crosscheck with the result from Turnitin as well and make some changes to the sentences), here are the corresponding pages:
   pg 5
   pg 7
   pg 16
   pg 22
   pg 28

let me know what you guys think about this, whether its necessary or not
thanks guys cheers

[Andres Garcia]

Please find my comments with change control.

just some references.

2013/5/14 ottopangestu <ottopa...@gmail.com>

[Andres Garcia]

2013/5/14 Andres Garcia <anga...@uc.cl>

[Diego Avilés]

Hi guys,

1. Regarding the picture, I took it personally. We could still mention the source.

I think is better to do it.. BUT. we have to prepare a change control and include before the cover. (As Bob explained in one of his emails).

Diego Avilés A.
Ingeniero Civil Industrial
Consultor Asociado - Chile Finance Advisors S.A.
dav...@chilefa.cl
www.chilefa.cl

au.linkedin.com/in/diegoaviles/

<FINAL DRAFT for Submission 1- Angarcia Review.docx>

[ottopangestu]

Hi guys,
me and mario already made the ms.word file of our additional citation and references.
there are still few references missing and we are not sure about it. please see the file and put some references that you might know. coz we are not sure of some tables/figures, whether you guys copied it or made it by yourself.

we need to send this bfore 5pm today, so please lemme know asap

thanks guys cheers