Actually, this statement feels like a good fit to me. If I came across that mission statement somewhere about some group, I would want to be a part of it. Thanks for taking the time to write it up.
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I think this is quite good and would recommend only the following 2 changes: replace "value" with "change" in the last sentence and include a sentence that goes something like "promote and develop rational thought in all aspects of life."
Regards,
Jason
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Warning: I may be suffering from Status Quo bias. If our mission already included the directive to promote and develop rational thought, would you think it a good idea to drop the word 'rational'? I feel like such a statement was already implicit in our unspoken purpose, and the separate defining was needed. What do you think?How can you improve your conception of rationality? Not by saying to yourself, “It is my duty to be rational.” By this you only enshrine your mistaken conception. Perhaps your conception of rationality is that it is rational to believe the words of the Great Teacher, and the Great Teacher says, “The sky is green,” and you look up at the sky and see blue. If you think: “It may look like the sky is blue, but rationality is to believe the words of the Great Teacher,” you lose a chance to discover your mistake.
Do not ask whether it is “the Way” to do this or that. Ask whether the sky is blue or green. If you speak overmuch of the Way you will not attain it.