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Hi Rasika,
I have checked your resume. There are few changes which you should do in your resume. Changes to be done are:
1. Check for the extra spaces. 2. Add your signature at the bottom.
3. Add Date and place at the bottom.
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Prajakta Pasalkar
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Well, that is a nice exercise:) I am glad!!!
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Hi Prajakta,
Thank you for reviewing my resume and giving your suggestions. You suggested me to add signature, date and place at the bottom but actually Shubhra suggested me that there is no need to add it , so that's why I didn't add it in my resume. And about extra spaces I'll remove it.
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Rasika
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Where have others gone????? I can see Rasika, Prajakta, Payal, Sachin, Prasanna, Amol and few more that's all. Correct me I am missing something/one here.
We're in a team so we have to go for a "PUSH" factor.
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Hi ,
I am attaching my resume please let me know for any corrections to be made. Waiting for your reply.
Thanks & Regards Priyanka Rokade
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Hi Nandkumar,
Thanks for reviewing my resume but the last sentence "I hereby declare that the information furnished above is true to the best
of my knowledge. " should be written in this fashion only there is no need to give a space between here and by.
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Hi Shyam,
Changes to be done in your resume are:
No need to write CURRICULUM VITAE at top.
Don't mention date of birth at top. Mention it in personal details.
size of percentage of B.C.A is 12 and its 9 for other.
For row where you enter B.C.A details check for spaces. you gave extra space in each column of that row.
In Technical
proficiency there is no need to write operating system details and it is preferable that you should mention everything in single row itself.
Place: Pune should appear before date.
No need to put border to resume.
"The above information,
to the best of my knowledge, is correct and true." you can re-frame this sentence as The above information is correct and true to the best of my knowledge.
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Prajakta Pasalkar
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Hi Priyanka,
Changes to be done in your resume are:
I am not sure about the order of columns of educational details. Check for it.
Training 1 this heading is bold and italic where others are bold only .
No need to give colon after languages known and web technologies.
Keep all headings in same format.
Check for the font some where it is Vardana and some where it is Arial.
Check for the extra spaces in resume. you gave one extra space before Marathi.
Add date and your signature i.e.Priyanka Rokade at the end if you can.
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Hi Reshma,
Changes to be done in resume are :
"To get the challenging position
within an organization where I could use my technical skills more
efficiently." In this sentence the word challenging is not suitable for the word Position. Challenging can be a assignments or work.
Everything should be left align in the resume.
Remove the colon given after Training.
Add bullets in CO-CURRICULAR ACTIVITIES.
Give full stop after last line i.e. I hereby declare that the
information furnished above is true to the best of my knowledge and beliefs.
Don't use '&' instead you write and.
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Hi Swapnil,
Changes to be done in your resume are:
Background of resume should be plane.
No need to put border to resume document.
All Details should be left align in resume.
Don't make use of colored bullets and it is preferred to make use of numbered bullet or circular bullets.
No need to write % sign in Percentage column.
No need to write os known in Technical skills.
If you have wrote Professional Summary then no need to write Technical skill column.
Add Project Details.
Font style should be same through out resume. Its is some where Times New Roman,some where Vardana and some where Arial.
Place:Pune should be written before Date.
Order in resume should be as follow:
Objective.
Educational details.
Achievements and Certification.
Training.
Technical Skill.
Project Details
Personal Details.
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Hi Vishwas,
Changes to be done in resume are:
Everything should be left align in resume documents.
In Year of passing you can write 2011 instead 2010-2011. 2010-2011 is bit confusing.
In Educational details everything should be in descending order of year of passing.
Networking and os column is not mandatory in technical skills.
Make use of circular bullets instead triangular.
Akhil
Bharatiya Gandharva Mahavidyalaya Mandal make it bold and write it in double quotes.
In Academic Projects everything should be properly index or you can write Academic Projects in tabular format.
Mention Address heading in personal details column .
Mention Date Heading at the end .
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Prajakta Pasalkar
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Very exhaustive review has happened:) Good work Prajakta:)
Regards,
Imran Khan
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I like the review comments # 2, #3, #5.
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