Introducing: The Cyclops

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Geoff Gibbs

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Apr 17, 2009, 5:18:36 PM4/17/09
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Cyclops
Cyclopes are a primordial race of giants, each with a single
eye in the middle of its forehead.

RACIAL TRAITS
Average Height: 11'-12' 6"
Average Weight: 335-410 lb.

Ability Scores:
+4 Strength
Size: Large
Speed: 6 squares
Vision: Normal
Languages: Elven

Glimpse the Future: You always act in the surprise
round.
Truesight: A cyclops has truesight 6 (see Monster
Manual).

Evil Eye Cyclops Racial Power
The eye of a cyclops sees more than others.
At-Will
Immediate Reaction Personal
Effect: You make a melee basic attack against the attacker.

The cyclopes entered the kingdom through one of the
many portals that opened during the creation of the new
sun. Generally quiet and secretive, the cyclopes keep to
themselves during their nomadic lives. It is said that the eye
of a cyclops can see into the near future and that this foresight
gives them almost supernatural reactions.

Physical Qualities
The cyclopes are giants, standing taller than even the
trolls. Other than their size and single eye, they appearance
resembles that of humans.

Playing a Cyclops
Most cyclopes are soft-spoken, hardworking individuals.
Their nomadic existence in harsh lands makes them a simple,
honest people, with little time from frivolities.

Cyclops Characteristics: earthy, hard-working, honest,
quiet
Male Names: Arges, Brontes, Polyphemus, Steropes
Female Names: Andromeda, Nemesis, Persephone, Thetis

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Matt Adams

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Apr 18, 2009, 6:20:02 AM4/18/09
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not bad.just a few questions though.
*Languages:* Elven
why elven?and no common?surely all pc races should be able to speak
common?

Evil Eye Cyclops Racial Power
The eye of a cyclops sees more than others.
At-Will
Immediate Reaction Personal
*Effect:* You make a melee basic attack against the attacker.

er.....this sounds like they get a free basic attack,each time they're
attacked in melee.that's just too powerful.maybe once per encounter,or
something like this:

'i saw that coming' Racial Power
The eye of a cyclops sees more than others
At-Will,encounter.
once per encounter,as an Immediate Reaction,you may make a basic melee
attack,against an enemy that just hit you.if it hits,they enemy is
dazed and prone,until the end of your next turn.

that sounds a little better.what do you think?
On 17 Apr, 22:18, Geoff Gibbs <ge...@world-of-geoff.co.uk> wrote:
> Cyclops
> Cyclopes are a primordial race of giants, each with a single
> eye in the middle of its forehead.
>
> RACIAL TRAITS
> *Average Height:* 11'-12' 6"
> *Average Weight:* 335-410 lb.
> *
> Ability Scores:* +4 Strength
> *Size:* Large
> *Speed:* 6 squares
> *Vision:* Normal
> *Languages:* Elven
>
> *Glimpse the Future:* You always act in the surprise
> round.
> *Truesight:* A cyclops has truesight 6 (see Monster
> Manual).
>
> Evil Eye Cyclops Racial Power
> The eye of a cyclops sees more than others.
> At-Will
> Immediate Reaction Personal
> *Effect:* You make a melee basic attack against the attacker.
>
> The cyclopes entered the kingdom through one of the
> many portals that opened during the creation of the new
> sun. Generally quiet and secretive, the cyclopes keep to
> themselves during their nomadic lives. It is said that the eye
> of a cyclops can see into the near future and that this foresight
> gives them almost supernatural reactions.
>
> Physical Qualities
> The cyclopes are giants, standing taller than even the
> trolls. Other than their size and single eye, they appearance
> resembles that of humans.
>
> Playing a Cyclops
> Most cyclopes are soft-spoken, hardworking individuals.
> Their nomadic existence in harsh lands makes them a simple,
> honest people, with little time from frivolities.
>
> *Cyclops Characteristics:* earthy, hard-working, honest,
> quiet
> *Male Names:* Arges, Brontes, Polyphemus, Steropes
> *Female Names:* Andromeda, Nemesis, Persephone, Thetis
>
> --
> Geoff Gibbs

Geoff Gibbs

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Apr 18, 2009, 1:17:36 PM4/18/09
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Doh! I missed the trigger!


Evil Eye Cyclops Racial Power
The eye of a cyclops sees more than others.
At-Will
Immediate Reaction Personal
Trigger: You are missed by a melee attack
Effect: You make a melee basic attack against the attacker.

2009/4/18 Matt Adams <mada...@btinternet.com>



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Matt Adams

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Apr 18, 2009, 4:05:06 PM4/18/09
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i still think that's too powerful,mate.seriously.
considering,at least half of most pc groups are melee,and most hit
about 65% of the time,you're almost guaranteed an extra attack or
two.far too powerful.
example:a def and 2 strikers attack a cyclops.per turn,chances are one
of them is going to miss the cyclops.this gives the cyclops at least
one more attack than it should get.and considering they're going to be
carrying large sized weapons,this will hurt a lot.
once per encounter would be better.
take a look at all the races in the phb 1+2.most half an encounter
power as racial,not an at will.especially one so nasty.

On 18 Apr, 18:17, Geoff Gibbs <ge...@world-of-geoff.co.uk> wrote:
> Doh! I missed the trigger!
>
> Evil Eye Cyclops Racial Power
> The eye of a cyclops sees more than others.
> At-Will
> Immediate Reaction Personal
> *Trigger: *You are missed by a melee attack*
> **Effect:* You make a melee basic attack against the attacker.
>
> 2009/4/18 Matt Adams <madams...@btinternet.com>
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