Motu Patlu

[David]

Before the story starts, I just want to let you know that this is my first attempt at making a lost episode creepypasta, so feel free to give me some criticism and tell me what I need to improve on. Without further ado, enjoy the story.

I am 12 years old I live in Mumbai,India. I am a Major Fan of Motu Patlu and whenever I returned home from school , I would never miss the Show which always aired on Nickelodeon from 5 pm to 5:30 Pm and really, this comedy show would erase away the boredom of School and gift me a moment of Laughter and Happiness. If you don't know about Motu Patlu, this show stars two friends, Motu and Patlu, landing in trouble and comical situations, later being rescued only by luck. Motu is a fat man who serves as one of the central protagonists in this show. He loves to eat samosas which increase his power drastically, giving him the ability to defeat his normally superior rivals. Samosas also increase his speed, strength, vision, and intelligence, also allowing him to lift boulders and vehicles. Patlu is a thin man who serves as one of the show's central protagonists. He is often portrayed as the smartest guy in the city however, he often gets into a lot of trouble with Motu. He dislikes samosas but likes to read the newspapers. Occasionally, Ghasitaram misdirects and swindles them by making them try Dr. Jhatka's vast repertoire of quirky gadgets and gizmos. Ultimately, Motu Patlu is one of the Most Loved Shows in India with over 1000 Episodes and with 13 Seasons...

Unfortunately, One dark Moment came from this show which proved my imagination wrong and I would never forget about that episode .... From that day onwards, I could no longer see Motu and Patlu as Friendly and Humorous Characters. One episode, that remains so obscure that only I and, a few others have seen. The Episode is called 'Motu the Demon'.....

It was 13th Friday,2014.The day like any other day, I returned home from School at 2 Pm ,Have Lunch, Watched Pakdam Padkai with my Brother and then we both eagerly waited for Motu Patlu Show. Soon after the Previous show ended, Nickelodeon announced for New Upcoming episode of Motu Patlu and Me and My brother were filled with Joy and Glee. We could not Imagine that we were watching the show at perfect timings. Perfect ....The Show started finally but something was not Normal. The flashy and energetic intro theme played, although it was played a little differently than I recall. The music was a little different, and the show's logo wasn't animated, it's colours were done rather sloppily as well, almost like something a little kid would do on a Doodle Board or a Glow Board. I ignored it, assuming that it was done just for this 'special' episode. The title of the episode was "Motu The Demon", a sort of Creepy title, with Black Background Colour but I didn't really pay too much attention.

It began with a view of Furfuri Nagar just like other Episodes but the sky looked little bit Dark and the Houses looked like Dilapidated as if just before Few seconds, a earthquake occurred. Anyway, the scene shifted to View of Motu Patlu s' House which looked a bit Different like the house is sort of 19th century slum house. Inside, Motu was sleeping on his Bed and Patlu was sleeping on the Floor. The utensils in the house were not kept in proper order and even the Household items were too displaced...A sound of Rooster crowing was heard and Motu Woke Up...Motu felt that he was very hungry and Waked up Patlu and Told him to cook Fresh Samosas for him. He was saying it in a very different tone like a Grumpy Old Man. Patlu roared slightly in Annoyed manner and the dialogues in Hindi exchanged between them are mentioned below:-

Patlu(Angry)-How Dare you Call me a friend, You Fat ,Foolish, chubster, chunky monkey, elephant with no Brain ??!! (Me and My brother were completely shocked to this point. How could Patlu and Motu who were know for their long lasting or permanent friendship suddenly became hard core enemies??

Patlu(Shouting Furiously)-Yes, you are actually a DEMON!!! ... DEMON FROM HELL. WHO TOOK BIRTH TO DESTROY ME..??(I wondered how the Hell ,Creators Of Motu Patlu could use Demon word in this episode...which is meant to be silly or Funny.

Motu s' face turned bright red and he advanced steadily towards Patlu...Patlu still screaming in Furious tone ,claiming Motu to be a Demon.. Motu further advances forward almost , intending to teach Patlu a cruel lesson .Suddenly, he sprinted towards Patlu and held his collar tightly almost like a strangulating rope and threw Patlu at a high speed towards the Kitchen Sink. His head collided with the sharp edge of a Vegetable Cutter ,making a clean and Deep cut which spread from his Right eye to his Neck.... I almost vomited on my couch and my brother ran away from me as if he was scared to his soul...I could hardly believe what was happening, how could such a cheery and fun kids show be taking such a dark and twisted turn. I was considering turning the television off, but I was too scared to be left in the dark by now, nearly frozen by fear and disturbed intensely at the terrible things that Motu was Doing. Motu murdered his own Very , Very close Best friend who always helped him in times of Trouble....All the sweet memories vanished in Motu s' Mind.

Still, Motu was Furious and He said Loudly "Lie there in Peace .!!!....I am going to leave you Forever....Forever , You Heard Me???? FOREVER!!! May you have no such terrible friendship with Others tooo.... Bye Bye.... I will live with my other friends who will Surely Treat me in Good Manner"

Motu was walking with a Bright but still annoyed mood. Suddenly, Motu s' Neighbor, Boxer came to him and told him that he just renovated his own car and He wants a test drive telling him to accompany him for a Short Test Drive. Next, Boxer s' car was shown but it was different, it looked like a bit of Ford Mustang with Red colour and 'Boxer' written in yellow highlight by a 5 year old child. I just Brushed up with this thought and continued watching.. Motu was excited to be with him and he jumped on the driver seat next to Boxer who was on the Passenger Seat.. Boxer Yelled "DRIVE" and Motu droved the car slowly.. Boxer yelled Again "More Faster!!! My car should go like a Racer Car ...FAST.. FAST" .Motu further increased the speed and suddenly, the speedometer on His car jumped to above 200 Km/hr...Boxer shrieked for help and Motu immediately jumped from his seat ..The car with Boxer on it crossed a Cliff , flew high up in air (the clouds in sky appeared to be like a sort of handmade crafted cotton Balls clumped together and No birds in sky) and Crashed loudly on the ground showing a live explosion of a Grenade .....At this point, I could sadly guess that due to Motu s' Stupidity, Boxer lost his Life ....Motu on other hand, witnessed the explosion in fear and ran away as fast as possible.

Now, Motu feeling guilty for his acts , walked in slow pace. The camera zoomed close to his eyes and it looked like instead of Cartonic tears, Real Life Tear drops were shown and the moaning sound was of a 50 year old man. I was terrified by the events whatever Happened till now and I felt to have strong urge for reaching the TV Remote but my entire body was rigid and I have no option other than to watch rest of the episode..

Motu walked to Dr.Jhatka s' lab where inside Dr.Jhatka along with Ghasitaram was experimenting on a very huge container of Green coloured ,Boiling acid and both of them were on a Tall ladder, close to the rim . Motu yelled at them for Attention but Dr.Jhatka shooed him like a beggar, telling him to go away as he was busy in testing a new chemical that melts any substance ,even stronger than Lava and he does not want to waste time further , Ghasitaram Also showed signs of supporting Dr.Jhatka. Motu Again became Angry and he threw a nearby Empty lab beaker into Dr.Jhatka ,making him injured and Dr.Jhatka Suddenly slips from the ladder and Fell on the acid, Ghasitaram too fell into it in act of rescuing Dr.Jhatka. Boils erupted and their Shrieks for help faded away. Motu tried to search them everywhere in the Lab but to no avail.. Motu thought that they might be experimenting something else too which he could not see.. Motu left away murmuring vaguely. when he reached the door, ,he looked back for Dr.Jhatka and Ghasitaram but it was clear that Motu killed them in his own hands. Then, Motu saw a test tube filled with red liquid and he thought to be it a Red Coloured Fruit Juice...He drank it in one gulp...The gulp sound sounded too real.

Motu now went to Chaiwala, clearing all his thoughts and Asked him cheerfully to give him samosas. Chaiwala growled in Anger "Motu....This time NO SAMOSAS UNLESS YOU CLEAR YOUR PREVIOUS DUES FROM ME.....YOU WILL PAY IT RIGHT NOW" . Motu now fumes in Anger and suddenly , he turns to his Psychotic Behavior , for a brief second unconscious due to the effects of drinking the red coloured acid(Which he thought it to be fruit juice).He grabbed Chailwala s' shirt collar tightly and slammed straight into the boiling Oil kept in the Iron Pot. He does it for few times until Chaiwala released his last breath...His Burnt face was zoomed and it was sooo horrific and gory that I vomited badly into my couch....Immediately, Inspector B. Chingum arrived at the scene and was shocked to see the gruesome murder ...He asked Motu "What have you Done??" and Motu told him in Cold hearted tone that simply , he put off Chaiwala for not obeying his order. Inspector B. Chingum Threatened him to arrest for murder charge but before he could say further. Motu Dodged him swiftly, Slowly Taking out his revolver and pointed at Chingum s' Forehead. Chingum stood in silence and I could not believe for first time Motu tried to attack Chingum ....Chingum asked" MOTU?!!! HOW COULD YOU?"....Motu replied back with a tone of Patrick Bateman(A leading character from the Movie; The American Psycho) to Chingum "Because I AM A DEMON" and he pulled the trigger. The screen went Black suddenly and static followed by a loud pitched sound of a Gunshot .....This sound almost pierced my ears as if someone pulled the trigger of a pistol in front of my ear...

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