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[ivor]

Franks luck is running out as our story continues.

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[ivor]

I have to really admit, I go back many times to fine tune my writing,
This latest page was no exception. I like the way the tension is
building, although by now most could guess the upcoming conclusion. I
am flushing out the nature of the characters, and am getting a kick
out of it. The big payoff is that much more powerful, Anyone want to
venture a guess on how the murder and his friends pay for their
crimes?

On Aug 11, 1:21 pm, ivor <ivo...@hotmail.com> wrote:
> Franks luck is running out as our story continues.
>

> Click onhttp://groups.google.com/group/ivor-presents/web/august-11-2010-tell-...

[MVS]

The story is starting to gel, great.

On Aug 13, 3:23 pm, ivor <ivo...@hotmail.com> wrote:
> I have to really admit, I go back many times to fine tune my writing,
> This latest page was no exception. I like the way the tension is
> building, although by now most could guess the upcoming conclusion. I
> am flushing out the nature of the characters, and am getting a kick
> out of it.  The big payoff is that much more powerful, Anyone want to

> venture a guess on how the murder and his friends pay for theirion seems

[ivor]

Thank you, it all comes together in the next and final chapter(s) A
fitting conclusion to an exhilarating romp. although I see myself up
late into the night, amending my original, all for the best, of
course!