I love the concept! And especially the one page like a book mark.
The only change: I would do is “ Celebrate – with music & dance, instead of art.
I would add an email address
Great job!
Guru Bhakti Dasi
My husband’s comments:
Very good design concept, using the photos:
Possible improvements:
(1) Right now from the top down, there are many females & a child & a baby. But for balance it also needs a shot of a male devotee, either a swami like Giriraja Swami, or someone like Raghunath, Gauravani, Maha Hari, etc.
(2) The picture of prasada is so busy; probably better to have a close-up of easily recognizable cuisine like puris & subji, fruit, etc., taken from Kurma’s cookbook or somewhere like that.
(3) The group photo at the bottom may be too distant; better to be more close up like the other photos.
(4) It’s hard to tell whether the pictures & captions line up from right to left, or up & down. I thought it was right to left, but then noticed the Prasad & caption go up & down.
(5) I apologize if this is nit-picking. The design is good.
Personally, instead of the shot with the child & baby can you possibly have a family with a baby & child. The Manor in England has good pics.
Ys
Guru Bhakti Dasi
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Dear Devotees,
Another thought: both dancers are in costume. We think one of the pictures should be devotees dancing in kirtan without costume. We think take out the estatic dance pic, leave the Bharat natyam one.
Guru Bhakti
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Dear Devotees,