See below – Suggestion is to not have limiting words like “Folsom residents” in the objective.
See if this makes sense for an objective:
"Secure, in a reasonable amount of time via donations and/or financing as agreed to by the Community, a cost effective, permanent location for the Islamic Society of Folsom, and a comprehensive, cost efficient facility for the Folsom Crescent School,.”
We can add in details beneath that:
- Based on current financial outlook and long term assessment of in-coming donations/pledges, we can afford up to a $1.5M investment
- FCS goals for enhancing its offering to its current and future student are better implemented with a cost efficient permanent location
--osman