Don't worry about it. We all have our own strengths.
After reading this letter, I really feel like I'm making a contribution here. Not simply I'm just giving ideas, but adding to the project.
the letter is good, a few minor things. At the end of the fourth paragraph, I would add a line that says: "We are looking to have this be between 3 to 8 minutes long." The reason for this, is that by what is written, someone can submit 30 second clip, which would get annoying fast, or a 20 minute clip, which will take up space. We could hope that the students wouldn't use either extreme, but let's nip this in the bud now rather than later.
Dear students, should be Dear Students,
I would remove the three blue links in this. I see what you are trying to do, but generally a formal request should be black and white. More than that, what if someone prints this and hands it out, like the teacher. They can't click on the link on a piece of paper. What we can do, for the first two, is to have a footnote on the bottom and number the two music piece and in the footnotes, provide the link (still without the blue underline). We could also take it out all together, as anyone worth their salt in the new age should be able to use google.
The last underline should be removed, and just keep it written out as URL.
You should provide your name at the end like this:
Peter Mosur
Internet Response League
ilikef...@irl.comOther than that, I think this is exactly what we need.