Hey, I just had a few questions/comments:
1. What are those images in the appendix right now? they aren't referenced in the report so either we have to reference them or take them out
2.
JING: in the powerpoint you mentioned that in shanghai they speak Shanghainese, in Beijing - Beijing dialect, and in Guangzhou - Cantonese...can you give me the source you got this from please.
3.
PETER: what is that link at the bottom of your part? And are there any calculations that you did that you can show for the marketing objectives for the first 3 years?
4.
EIMAN: your part is missing your sources in MLA format and embedded citations
5. Where is the competitive analysis suppose to go? It's not in the report guideline (I don't think) other than in part 4.3
6. For the Data Base, are we suppose to list ALL of our sources (different articles, books, etc...) because in the guideline it says "give a complete overview of all the data you used" -- but right now there's only 9 (unless they cover all of the 20+ sources we have listed right now)
7. Does the report need to be binded or just printed? -- are we all pitching in to print & bind the report....and who is going to print it? (I'm most likely not going to class tonight)
- I moved the exec summary to the beginning (after the title page) because that's where exec summaries are suppose to be and took it out of the TOC
- I've edited the introduction
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JING: I moved your geography part and meshed it in with my part (cultural environment)
Vicky