my Elevator Speech

[Marie Ransome]

Hi. My name is Marie Ransome. I am an Integrative Health Counselor. I
work with people who want good health, energy & vitality. I help my
clients to reduce the stress in their lives.

[JessDeines]

Hi Marie,

I think this sounds good but I think you should define 'people' like
adults or teenagers or a specific population. People is very broad in
my opinion. You could even narrow it down to young adults, middle aged
or older adults depending on what your niche is. I also think
narrowing down your niche, too, would help in your definition of what
you do. For example, is your target market working adults that are
having difficulty balancing work, home life and their health which is
making their lives full of stress and are unsure of how to fix it,
etc... Hope that makes sense :-)

Jessica