verbal flab

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Rich D

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Jul 20, 2021, 10:44:08 PMJul 20
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"What dreams may come,
in that long slumber of death,
must give us pause."

What dreams may come,
in that long slumber,
must give us pause."

Which one is taut, and which flabby?

I always said, old Shakey had some talent, but he
could have used an editor with a sharp red pen -

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Rich

John W Kennedy

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Jul 21, 2021, 12:44:59 PMJul 21
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Which one are you pretending to be by Shakespeare?


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John W. Kennedy
"The blind rulers of Logres
Nourished the land on a fallacy of rational virtue."
-- Charles Williams. "Taliessin through Logres: Prelude"
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