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Dinehart

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Jun 9, 2008, 9:35:32 PM6/9/08
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I have created a new page for the discussion of the newly created
design document, which I just posted. Please give it a look over and
let's discuss.

Click on http://groups.google.com/group/gw-sig-tools-initiative/web/design-documenation?hl=en
- or copy & paste it into your browser's address bar if that doesn't
work.

Go team!

Roane Beard

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Jun 9, 2008, 9:50:16 PM6/9/08
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I'm not sure what you mean by goal #3: "To forge a partner that
understands the needs of game writer." Do you mean partnership?



Stephen E. Dinehart

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Jun 9, 2008, 9:52:34 PM6/9/08
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Yep I was struggling at that point. Indeed, you are correct.
The goals need to be more clear, care to take a pass?

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Roane Beard

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Jun 9, 2008, 9:54:48 PM6/9/08
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Sure, if you want. I'm working on Open Office here, though. I'll take a crack at it when I get home and can edit it in word. About an hour or so.

Really, though, that was the only element that was unclear.

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Stephen E. Dinehart

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Jun 9, 2008, 10:02:20 PM6/9/08
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Cool, no biggie then. I'll just mod it, thanks for the edit!

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Roane Beard

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Jun 9, 2008, 11:05:17 PM6/9/08
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No problem!
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Dinehart

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Jun 10, 2008, 1:59:00 AM6/10/08
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Version 1.1 is up

I just did some polish on the verbiage.

Dinehart

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Jun 10, 2008, 1:59:23 AM6/10/08
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Coray Seifert

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Jun 10, 2008, 7:34:04 AM6/10/08
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Looks great guys! Ship it! :)

Drew McGee

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Jun 10, 2008, 9:36:49 AM6/10/08
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Hey guys, I think it looks great. There are a few typos, but I'm not
sure if they're worth worrying about.

corvus...@zakelro.com

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Jun 10, 2008, 9:39:18 AM6/10/08
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We plan on giving this doc to Celtx before the meeting tomorrow. so
plese point out any and all typos you find. Thanks!

On 6/10/08, Drew McGee <drewda...@yahoo.com> wrote:
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> Hey guys, I think it looks great. There are a few typos, but I'm not
> sure if they're worth worrying about.
> >
>


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Ron Toland

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Jun 10, 2008, 10:18:52 AM6/10/08
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Thanks for putting this together, Stephen.

I found a few typos:

1) The summary for feature 3 needs a "to": "This feature allows the
user *to* customize.."
2) In the description for feature 3, there's a carriage return
inserted into "play designers": "play desi" \r "ners" (at least, on my
machine)
3) In the summary for feature 4, the "encourages" in the last sentence
shouldn't be capitalized.

Other than that, it looks great!

Ron

On Jun 10, 8:39 am, corvus.el...@zakelro.com wrote:
> We plan on giving this doc to Celtx before the meeting tomorrow. so
> plese point out any and all typos you find. Thanks!
>

Drew McGee

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Jun 10, 2008, 11:31:43 AM6/10/08
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Ron, you stole most of my thunder, but I managed to unearth one more.
In Feature 7, the last line of the Summary says, "and values of said
variables can assigned to user defined data sets." There should be a
"be" between "can" and "assigned".

Hopefully, things go smoothly with CeltX!

Drew

Stephen E. Dinehart

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Jun 10, 2008, 1:09:09 PM6/10/08
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Hey if you see typos, point them out, or better yet, edit them! Remember this is a group effort!

Drew McGee wrote:

Stephen E. Dinehart

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Jun 10, 2008, 1:09:48 PM6/10/08
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Awesome, can you update the doc to reflect your edits?

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Stephen E. Dinehart

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Jun 10, 2008, 1:15:01 PM6/10/08
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Thanks Drew,

Good eye man, good eye!

Drew McGee wrote:

Ron Toland

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Jun 10, 2008, 2:53:11 PM6/10/08
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I've uploaded version 1.2 of the doc after fixing the typos Drew and I
found.

Ron
> >>Corvus Elrod, Zakelro Story Studiohttp://www.zakelro.comhttp://www.linkedin.com/in/corvusI just
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