[Fabian Kauer]

Hey guys,

it's nearly done. Just read through the whole assignment, cut a bit, worked on the flow and put in some more references from his articles to be on the safe side. I think it is fantastic and quite juicy and should meet Sh..'s expectations (if you look at the requirements), but you never know what this guy wants.

I already read over the whole document, but it's still not my mother language:-( So if anybody commits to read through the document, I would then make the adjustments this evening and send it out to everybody for a final review.

Please send me your exam numbers I did not find an assignment where we put down all of them, although I thought we did it several times:-(

Thanks

Fabian

[Anne Pao]

Hi fabby thanks for all your work in coordinating and pulling together! I can take a read through at 5 tonight and do minor grammar edits.

Question- do we need appendix c? I think all that information was incorporated to the events synthesis section? Might seem redundant unless shadrick specifically wanted us to include? Otherwise we could eliminate that appendix and cut down several pages?

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[Nicholas' iPhone]

Thanks Fabian.

I agree with Anne regarding Appendix C.

Dylan and I are busy going through the report at the moment making some edits and formatting. I'll send out an updated and formatted report in about an hour.

Please use this version to make your further edits (track changes) so we can avoid further formatting.

Cherio Team

Thanks guys.

[Fabian Kauer]

Hey guys, the idea behind the Appendix was to show him the efforts we put into this. Still think that it could be of help. But it's of course not a problem to cut it out.

Thanks for reviewing.

Anne would you please use Nick's document for your comments in track changes please?

Cheers

Fabian

[Anne Pao]

Sure will do. Still think we should take out appendix c otherwise it would be like keeping in different older drafts. Thanks nick and Dylan for doing the first read through!

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[Anne Pao]

Hi guys,

I've updated the draft Nick sent over and added in a couple points from Dylan.

Went through made grammar edits and then accepted all changes so it is clean and ready to upload. Inclusive of appendices we are down to 29 pages which I think is much more digestible. I eliminated Appendix C.

Fabian - if you are happy with it feel free to upload to Instructor tonight!

Thanks all! Great inputs, teamwork and coordination Fabby!

AP

 

Anne Pao

Full-Time MBA Candidate 2013, University of Cape Town

[Fabian Kauer]

Hey guys,

I had to change the formatting again as we are limited to 15 pages. Attached the final version of the assignment. I will upload it now to instructor. Do you think we have to get it through turnit-in? There is nothing written in the course outline.

Regards

Fabian

[Nicholas Pilz]

Hey Fabi,

Here is the latest report. Feel free to upload now.

Thanks bud.

[Anne Pao]

Nope td not required. Nomzamoconfirmwd with shadrick

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