Cheers,
Ben
Hi Ben,
As I wrote before, I think this typeface is very good and a lot of fun. I think you have done a great job with the details, and it is working really well with the Latin in terms of harmonisation and weight.
Few small notes:
- Some glyphs that are missing: the Sheqel symbol (uni20AA), the upper Maqaf (uni05BE), Geresh (uni05F3), Gershaym (uni05F4)
- By looking at the glyphs (on Glyphsapp) in a very large size, I could see that the Lamed has some strange things going on with white string inside the black (the construction of the glyph.
Same in the Nun.
- The Holam in the Vav should be in the middle. Right now its far to the left.
- Even though you already added a roof to the Samech, I still think that the Tet is a bit too similar. Perhaps bringing the middle stroke of the Tet a bit downward?
- Perhaps this is personal taste, but I think the arm of the Ayin is too wiggely. I think it can be mellowed a little.
- I think the leg of the Kuf is too close to the rest of it (especially in the bold weight).
- One more tiny detail, I think that some kerning should be between Resh and period (same with the similar characters and the comma).
I really like the outstroke of the Pe. And I can definitely see people using it for children’s stories and many other fun stuff!
Have a lovely day,
Liron