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Lisa Henke

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Jun 21, 2012, 11:29:23 AM6/21/12

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Dear Bloggers!

Finally, we got all of your articles reviewed and you can find them online now! Thanks a lot for such great first articles on futurechallenges.org. We thought, it would be nice for you to get a little feedback and some thoughts for your following work.

First of all: you all did a really great job, we are very impressed of your first writings. The whole team gave the feedback, that you wrote really interesting stories, all with a personal! Flávio and I, we understood every story although we are not experts on neither of those topics… That is exactly what we were looking for!

A couple of more thoughts:

You all used really nice pictures! Great, please continue in using them, but make sure you write, to whom this photo belongs!
Please continue to use references to make your texts more understabdable and give more credibility to your thoughts. Also offer your reader the opportunity to get more information about your thoughts!
Elis’ and Luciano’s text got a really good response on facebook. Congrats on that! Continue to use your social media channels, to reach as many readers as possible.
All of your texts were very fluent and clear. But keep in mind, concerning the length of the articles, that on the internet, texts rather are read when they are not too long ;)

And please, please, please, although it is kind of long-winded, post your articles also on the official blog, Eike sent you the mail about!!

Really nice job – all of you!
We are looking forward to reading your new ideas!