Six-Word Stories

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Tim Gourley

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Mar 26, 2010, 1:00:49 PM3/26/10
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Ernest Hemingway once wrote an entire story using only six words: "For
Sale: baby shoes, never worn."

It's simple, yet breathtakingly profound. It makes you think. Why were
the shoes never worn? There's a lot of emotion you can read into that
simple sentence, and it sparks your imagination to fill in the blanks
left behind by a master storyteller. Let's try to come up with our own
six-word stories. Reply to this thread and submit your own. We'll
feature what we can at the next meeting in April.

Rules: It must be six words: no more, no less. Contractions are ok,
but consider your word choices carefully. The story must be
grammatically correct.

It's harder than it sounds. This took me a while, but here's my first story:

Once discovered, he disappeared in smoke.

- Tim

Chowning, Karolyn J.

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Mar 26, 2010, 3:27:42 PM3/26/10
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Yes!! The perfect prompt that will.. er... *prompt* me to participate! I love it.


Karolyn Chowning
kcho...@ou.edu

- Tim

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Chad Henderson

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Mar 26, 2010, 4:04:40 PM3/26/10
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great idea...

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Douglas Fasching

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Mar 26, 2010, 4:51:53 PM3/26/10
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I love and I hate this prompt.

I've even teased myself with the same challenge from time to time, but
God help me I always end up trying to sell some article of clothing
more heartbreaking.

Douglas


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Billy Mabray

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Mar 26, 2010, 5:00:22 PM3/26/10
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"Dig a grave."

"Again?" he muttered.

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Lori

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Mar 26, 2010, 5:42:27 PM3/26/10
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I like this challenge! Here's my first attempt:

How many times will I stop?

-Lori

Chad Henderson

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Mar 26, 2010, 5:56:39 PM3/26/10
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Eventually, his sword grew too heavy.

James Edward Gray II

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Mar 26, 2010, 6:07:47 PM3/26/10
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On Mar 26, 2010, at 4:00 PM, Billy Mabray wrote:

> "Dig a grave."
>
> "Again?" he muttered.

That is awesome.

James Edward Gray II

Dianna Rustin

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Mar 26, 2010, 11:09:33 PM3/26/10
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Dramatic teenager dies from broken heart.

Sent from my iPhone


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James Edward Gray II

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Mar 26, 2010, 11:46:37 PM3/26/10
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On Mar 26, 2010, at 12:00 PM, Tim Gourley wrote:

> Ernest Hemingway once wrote an entire story using only six words: "For
> Sale: baby shoes, never worn."

Terrific puzzle! We had the whole family toying with this one around the dinner table tonight.

I kept getting stuck on:

I think, but I cannot write.

Here's a better one though. It is a hand written dedication I wrote inside the first copy of my first published book that I ever signed:

For you, my love. Every word.

I went and looked in the book to make sure I was remembering it right. It was exactly six words and I wrote it several years before Tim sent this challenge. That was a neat find for me.

Here are some of my more story driven ideas:

"The magic is very strong today!"

He leapt, trusting in her arrival.

The baby smiled, she started crying.

Dana Gray is more clever than me and came up with:

Metal scrapes metal, glass shatters everywhere.

Tear of grief mar her smile.

The panel of judges stop arguing.

Too many shots does not exist.

My little brother, Andrew Gray, came up with:

I'm a beginner, so don't laugh.

There was only one conversation left.

James Edward Gray II

Sea

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Mar 28, 2010, 12:11:13 PM3/28/10
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First try:

"Young hearts, old hands: entwined forever."

Sea

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James Edward Gray II

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Mar 28, 2010, 1:33:23 PM3/28/10
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On Mar 26, 2010, at 12:00 PM, Tim Gourley wrote:

> Ernest Hemingway once wrote an entire story using only six words: "For
> Sale: baby shoes, never worn."

Two more:

The perfect recipe: just add passion.

The Mountie began searching in Texas.

James Edward Gray II

Lori

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Mar 29, 2010, 11:23:35 AM3/29/10
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Lol, this one just happened in real life...

Clearly, I had underestimated the applesauce.

- Lori

Chad Henderson

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Mar 29, 2010, 12:10:32 PM3/29/10
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lol

Pete Rustin

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Mar 29, 2010, 5:49:20 PM3/29/10
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very nice.

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Douglas Fasching

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Outside his fraternity her motorcycle beckoned.

Tim Gourley

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"Without you, life isn't the same…"

Billy Mabray

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"You!"
"No."
"Liar."
"Prove it."
"...Can't."

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Pete Rustin

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Apr 28, 2010, 6:18:27 PM4/28/10
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I have been throwing around an idea for this prompt in my head all month. Leave it to me to wait until the day of to submit it.

We Die.
We're born.
We grow.

Hope you enjoy, and I will see you all tonight!

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Rebecca Clemens

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Apr 30, 2010, 3:02:01 PM4/30/10
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I know this isn't my own, and it may be a bit after the fact, but I came across it while looking for something else and thought you all might be interested in seeing this collection of six word memoirs with photos at the following website:
 
Rebecca

Rebecca Clemens

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