Hi Roger,
In comparing the previous versions of the By-Laws and Covenants that you sent to Esther’s recent final clean versions, and other than what you mentioned for additional changes to Esther’s final clean version, I have no substantial changes to recommend, other than the following small editing issues.
Covenants:
- Page 7, Article II, Paragraphs 16 and 17, :
Esther’s recent clean version shows a paragraph numbering correction that was incorrect in the previous version. Nothing to change, only a difference between the two versions.
- Page 20, Article IX, Section 13, last sentence
Is the comma after “ten (10) days’” needed?
- Page 21, Article X, Section 2
Why is a paragraph break placed in the middle of the paragraph? Both versions show this.
A big thank you to the POA By-Laws and Covenants editing committee for all of your time and energy in preparing these documents and achieving this momentous milestone for the community. Incredible job!!!