my site!!!! take a look!
Stallion
Neil Paton
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Neil Paton
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Stuart Millington
<stal...@30hillcrest.freeserve.co.uk> wrote:
>check out my site please!!
>http://www.30hillcrest.freeserve.co.uk
- It starts out crap:
> <meta name="GENERATOR" content="Microsoft FrontPage Express 2.0">
Let's see if it gets any better (probably not!!):
- Have you ever heard of a thing called a "spell checker". Try using
one, you need one. Hint: "i" is not a word, "I" is.
- Quote: "<noframes><body bgcolor="#FFFFFF"></body></noframes>". FFS
get a clue. This will (a) remove *ANY* chance of a SE listing and (b)
piss a lot of people off. Dump the frames or build the frameset
correctly with real <noframes/> content. Tony Morgan's "All Index"
structure will work fine, if you insist on using crap things like
frames. As for "more coming soon", how about putting *something* there
in the first place? FWIW, your content does not justify the use of
frames, dump them.
- http://www.30hillcrest.freeserve.co.uk/stoney.htm The "links" are
not, they are just text - NOT links and you certainly cannot "Click
here" for a download or a screen shot.
- The news "page" is a few MoreOver headlines.
- The "Stories" page has no content and the claimed "Links" are not.
- Links. This has got to be a joke?!? 1 link and the "links" depend on
Javascript from Lycos, etc., etc. Stop trying to be fancy and learn
how to use an HTML <A> links.
- The "mail me" form responds with "Thankyou for your Mail, i will
read it as soon as possible, and if nessecery i will mail you back
(usually withing 24 hours).". Have you ever considered providing an
English version of this site?
- A search for "Star Trek" on the (Atomz powered) cheats search page
brings up one link to a CNC-RA page which does not mention "Star Trek"
anywhere. I can only assume it is the only content you have in this
section?
- "Me & Co" - Given the lack of grammar and total inability to spell,
or use a spell checker, it should have been obvious you were a victim
of the British Education system. My apologies, may be in "real life"
you will gain a second education to make up for your secondary
education[1].
[1] Very paraphrased from "Yes (Prime)Minister" ;(
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Stuart Millington
<ne...@npaton.fsnet.co.uk> wrote:
>Otherwise, a very nice site - very clean
>Grade: 8 / 10
If you ignore the content (lack thereof), language, grammar and
broken (non-existent) links. Otherwise -8/10.
Neil Paton
:-)