Is that the right version you've uploaded? Your email talks about 6.5 pages but 'short proposal semacomp 2' is exactly 6 pages of A4 not the 6.5 you mention below.
Mark
Re the confusion over the call submission programme, my advice would be to email the FP7 help desk for clarity. I'll try to look through the new proposal in light of the reviewers' comments over the next day or two.
Mark
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@Nick - it's nice to have you again :) hope you'll have more time for us now
:)
I was telling that those MACs are problematic :) So, we are on 6 (six) pages
which fits in propositions. In my opinion proposal looks more understandable
and easier to read. However I'll study it 'till skype meeting and have some
concrete suggestion apart from this "general terms".
I am free on December 2nd at 10, and maybe at 14. So I'll be available in
the morning for sure.
One more suggestion: except discussing proposal, can we all agree on
checking Alejandro's solution for our communication? So, after conference we
can switch...
hear you soon!
cheers,
Milan
I have tried Ideon also, and I believe that it should fit perfectly for our
needs.
One more question we can discuss on conference is should the Ideon be
Semacomp web also or will it be just back end for partners and we will
design one more page for public one in "general terms"...think about it and
we'll talk about it :)
cheers from Croatia,
Milan
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As agreed with Nick earlier today, I've attached two files: minor corrections to the sense, grammar etc. of the proposal and an assessment of whether we have met the reviewer's comments or not. I think the whole thing is looking a lot better (thanks Nick) in light of those comments but I also think the success/risk section could be clarified and organized.
Regards,
Mark
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Ah Lian
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Dear all,
Regards,
Mark
The points discussed were:
Nick
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The only problem I see is length -- what I added brings it to over 6 pages. My thinking for cutting down was bullet pointing the success/risk part (and shortening/clarifying) and possibly the methodology....
I think the bullet list for success/risk will also help clarity in that section which has also been criticised as vague.
Mark
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Elizabeth
Good morning everybody!
We started the process to register the domain www.semacomp.eu, it was the only one mentioned previously. I asked for the registration to our IT department some days ago, I don’t know if they have finished the process. But I guess that it won’t take much more to finish our space to share information and docs, maybe this week, I will tell you ASAP!
I hope everyone agree with the domain J
Regards,
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Hi Nick,
Thanks for this. I’ve attached some minor typos corrections. I’ve also added in a suggestion for the final section on success/risk. The accusation is that ‘success criteria are vague’ – I think that by bullet pointing like this and explicitly tying criteria to the three objectives listed at the top we can avoid this charge. After all, the project fails or succeeds on the basis of these objectives (even if we claim success despite various objectives failing).
I haven’t filled in the bullet points for each objective because I think that’s best left to you Nick. I do, however, think the last paragraph should be kept if modified following the new bullet points.
Regards,
Mark
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Well, your input gave me much to think about and I thank you very very much for that.
First of all, many many thanks to Alejandro for all the efforts about establishing our soon-to-be new group. Alejandro, keep us informed, tell us when the green light is on, and please please direct my deepest thanks to CITIC! I think that semacomp.eu is the best combination of all aspects. it is an EU project (proposal), it is mainly research, but it is research for very practical aims too. Perhaps I am too enthusiastic a unionist, but that "eu" at the end.... I like it! After all we all converged into the idea form almost anywhere on this continent. ;-)
Anyway, now that we will soon get an official european domain, let's go further.
Mark, thanks once more for your effort. You did exactly the right thing, since in my bullet list risks, countermeasures and benefits were quite mixed up. I transformed my previous list form into yours but I don't know if my "fill-ins" could tale more improvement. The classification works clearer now, but some things are hard to decide. For example: for me, as a theoretician, the number of "matches" between human and machine made meaning is primarily an experimental hint toward "truth" of theory. But I have to see too, that it is also a measure of for the practical quality of the whole system in terms of real world software. Considering this, and considering also the fact that we don't have so much space to formulate our proposal with all details, I simply put this under "Achievement of objective 1 – construction of the theoretical framework", though I am still ambivalent.
About your remark now, Mark, considering "isomorphism and clustering methods" on the one side, and "isomorphism and category theory" on the other. Here we have two different definitions of the word "isomorphism". In the first text passage it is isomorphism in general, as it appears in many different disciplines in order to denote "equal essence" or if you like "the same in other words". In the second text passage we have the mathematical meaning of "isomorphism" which at first doesn't say much about "meaning" at all - it only puts a a label on a "abstract mapping" between two "sets" - a mapping that preserves all intrinsic properties. It is the isomorphism of category theory as it is defined there, and as it can "map something onto something else". This mathematic definition is something.. pretty primitive. You just map something onto something else, keeping some things intact both on the source as also on the target. The meaning is the interpretation of this "something pretty primitive" by additional means that are input from the other disciplines. But the thing is that these "additional means" can be themselves such "pretty primitive isomorphisms", if well defined.
So.... we would need more space to describe that too. :-( I attach the new version (2.2) to this email. You will notice again that we got over 7 pages. :-( I tried to cut out anything that is not absolutely necessary, but I can't come up with anything shorter without losing to much of the important content. Any ideas for further shortening by keeping the substance intact? (In other words.... all the above is isomorphic to: Help!)
Rajendra, thank you also very very much for your thoughts and for making me aware of the fact that the template changed. I considered the changes in the attached version. You are absolutely right about the long term vision. But isn't that explicitly enough described in 1.1 and 1.2 - especially the last paragraph of 1.2? Please don't get me wrong here, I only speak of my personal understanding about that. For me the long term vision is something very "visible" there, but I would of course text in the sense of your example in the document you sent - provided we have the space of course. (:-()
Another thing to say here, I am not really sure if attaching documents to emails for our group is enough. I don't see my own attachments in the group while I see them in my email client. (To be sure I will send the attachment to all email addresses of our group separately too.) Anyway, I had also a warning that my last email (with the attachment) didn't reach Milan due to "Temporary local problems". Milan, are you still there?
And something additional too, that I think I must share with you, though perhaps many of you already know. Recent works by Simone Duss and Katharina Henke in the institute for Psychology and Neuropsychology in the University of Bern, seem to show that no "conscious intelligence", no "knowledge of the "I" about the "I"" is needed for learning. So, if no such thing like this is needed, then we have a great hint that our approach will be fruitful. If no "spiritual thing" is needed for learning (and thus also for meanings), then a formalization of this concept of "gaining meaning" must be quite viable without caring that much about wanting to solve the problem of "intelligence" first.
I will go get their articles and send them to you, and I think we should use them as a source in the detailed proposal, but the announcement of their last results turned me even more optimistic in terms of contents of our aim.
In practical terms however.. Still we have to squeeze so much in so little space for the time being. And ROM is full and life is short....
Have a good evening, thanks a lot again, and tell me what you think about version 2.2.
Cheers,
Nick
I am here and everything is ok. I got all the emails and attachments (at
least I hope so). It's been more than 10 days since I wrote last email and I
can't believe that (who said that time isn't flying when you are busy?).
Anyway, here are couple of my reactions on last group emails...
@Alejandro - I am also convinced that .eu domain is the best solution.
Thanks to CITIC and let us know when we can start using our new virtual
place.
As for the proposal; I have read it couple of times this morning and I must
say that with every version it gets more and more easier to read and
understand. Even though I am not sure is it because I have learned something
so now I can understand Nick's formulation better or is it because it's
written in easier way (understandable to "ordinary people" :) I believe it's
second choice...
I can't discus on theoretical part of proposal, but I would say that it has
"head and tail" for sure. Maybe details can be corrected but I believe that
we need some more of experienced opinion - Elena, Ah Lian (who else said
that he/she has EU project experience?). In this way Nick's, Mark's and
Rajendra's great work will be extra polished.
Couple of questions / suggestions:
- can we update www size as it's on May's data?
- putting all bulleted fields in one row on WP4 Computing Semantics Design
Phase maybe will give us more room on page 6?
One general thinking and correct me if you think different...I have a
feeling that only couple of consortium members are actually actively
responding to emails or proposals. I remember that there were times when
more than 20 email arrived in one day. Maybe I am bit impatient but it seems
that we aren't moving as fast as we could. Active participation will give us
"new wings" to finish this short proposal and submit it again (with more
success this time!).
Cheers,
Milan
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Karagiaouroglou
Sent: Monday, January 17, 2011 10:50 PM
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Subject: Re: [fp7-semantics-consortium] Re: Newsletter 20
Hi everybody!
with all details, I simply put this under "Achievement of objective 1 -
I am very much still in the loop and reading emails. LeedsMet has recently engaged a company to aid us in bringing in EU money. If you think it is appropriate, I can give them the document to read for comments.
Meanwhile I am spending some time thinking about arguments and predicates, and the boundaries in the usage of words and grammatical features. This is partly for a couple of other projects, but I think it is highly relevant for Semacomp too and will help in the writing of a full bid (assuming we get that far). I have not got my thinking as far as isomorphisms yet though.
Elizabeth
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Sent: 18 January 2011 12:32
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Subject: [fp7-semantics-consortium] Re: Newsletter 20
Hi Milan, nice to hear from you!
Cheers to all!
NIck
I checked web size. We can say that in December 2010. it's estimated on 22
billion web pages. It's not "too much" difference in numbers but at least
it's a updated info. Please put it in final proposal version.
Looking forward to hear news from our "shorten that proposal" adventure! :)
Cheers,
Milan
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Proposal looks good Nick -- and Elizabeth's suggestion is a great idea
-- we just need to cut down to length!
Re isomorphism categories/clustering etc. I just wanted to be sure that
we were not starting by talking about one methodology (isomorphic
clustering) then suddenly, mid-stream shifting to another methodology
(isomorphic categories) with no explanation.
Success/risk bullet points are much better and deal (greatly) with
accusations of lack of clarity. If anywhere can be shortened, I think
we should look here. Of course, the final points on graduated risks
doesn't really pertain to the whole lot and perhaps is better shortened
and embedded into risk mitigation 1. ('even 'bad' results are useful'
relates to the idea of graduated risk).
I think shorten it, update web figures as Milo suggests, then send it
onto Elizabeth's contact.
Regards,
Mark
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Reader in Creative Technologies
School of Business & Creative Technologies
University of Bolton
Work: http://www.bolton.ac.uk/gcct/
Personal: http://www.wikindx.com
> -----Original Message-----
> From: fp7-semantic...@googlegroups.com [mailto:fp7-semantics-
> conso...@googlegroups.com] On Behalf Of Guest, Elizabeth (INN)
> Sent: 18 January 2011 12:38
> To: fp7-semantic...@googlegroups.com
> Subject: RE: [fp7-semantics-consortium] Re: Newsletter 20
>
> Hi all,
>
> I am very much still in the loop and reading emails. LeedsMet has
> recently engaged a company to aid us in bringing in EU money. If you
> think it is appropriate, I can give them the document to read for
> comments.
>
> Meanwhile I am spending some time thinking about arguments and
> predicates, and the boundaries in the usage of words and grammatical
> features. This is partly for a couple of other projects, but I think
it
> is highly relevant for Semacomp too and will help in the writing of a
> full bid (assuming we get that far). I have not got my thinking as far
> as isomorphisms yet though.
>
> Elizabeth
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> conso...@googlegroups.com] on behalf of kickniko
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Mark