correction for creative writing - group 1

[IZYAN NADIA BINTI MOHD NIZAM]

           On one boring school day, Button who is a 9 years old kid was having a History class with his boring teacher, Ms. Pah. At first, he was learning quite well with her. He tried to listen and be focused in each and every second but as time passed by, he got bored by Ms. Pah’s teaching until he wanted to stop the class. So, to ease his boredom, he scribbled his paper with his 'own-made' cartoon strip which were him killing Ms. Pah as his boredom had reached to its maximum level.

At 9.20 a.m., Button had been counting the time since the past ten minutes. Miss Pah had been babbling about the history of the World War 2.  Button was not even focus in the class. He was looking through Miss Pah and was not even hearing a single thing that she said. It was really torturing him.

            So, he finished doing his cartoon strip. Again, he was bored. He was feeling like he is going to sleep but he decided to entertain himself. Button kept entertaining himself by sharpening his pencil while his teacher was teaching until it became a mini-pencil. Without looking at the clock, he thought it was already 9:30.

The class supposed to end at 9.30 a.m. “Yes, finally,” he said in his mind. But, Miss Pah was not even showing any signs of going out of the class. He wondered why. So, he turned back to look at the clock. 

 

The clock showed 9.03 a.m.  Button was starting to think that the clock might be broken or damage. He tried to ease his heart. He knew it was already 9.30. Unfortunately, the clock was not lying to him. He looked and looked at the clock for hundreds of times. It was true. It was only 9.03 a.m.!

 

            Button was frustrated. 20 minutes to go was like a year for it to come. He got fed up. He then knocked his head on his desk for many times. Miss Pah looked at him weirdly. She then asked him to stop banging his head and stand up so that he would not be sleepy in her class.