Whatif MSPAR remembered themself at the beginning of Pesterquest's prologue? If they didn't immediately leave Doc Scratch's mansion, but instead kept their character arc from Friendsim, and used their new knowledge of Homestuck to try and save someone?
I wrote this awhile ago so I don't remember every thought that led up to it but basically it's just a rewrite of gamzee's pesterquest route where gamz doesn't go crazy.
One thing I didn't like is that I'm a believer that the reason he got a little silly (killed two people and ruined everything) in canon was influence by lil cal in tandem with some other stuff and following his silly clown religion, but mostly lil cal. If the reader is able to separate him from that I'd like to think he would be about as normal as he was before going sober.
I just feel that, given that one of the themes of the game is that the reader wants to give these guys a better chance than the canon ever did it's kinda cruel to relegate him either to being a stoner or a murder.
You can either choose your actions by going to chapter select or just going forward and reading the endings one at a time.The rewrite includes 3 different endings and was originally written on google slides so it might be somewhat awkward to read as it had to be adjusted to only text. If you find yourself getting lost imagine his sprites ig
I have nothing against the pesterquest writers and I liked the game
it should be a relief to not have to worry about getting culled, but how can you possibly feel at ease when you're not under the same sky you're used to and you have nothing from home to cling to when you're alone?
(This was written for Pale Gamkar week on Tumblr, intended to fill multiple prompts... Day 2: Genderbend, Day 3: Wounds and Day 6: Song. Should I be posting it now, on Day 2? I'm not sure, but here it is.)
Your name is Jade Harley, and right now, you feel very young. You're very good at taking care of yourself though, and can do lots of things for yourself with your guardian dog Bec's help. It's not much different from any other day where you feel big. You count on your reminder covered fingers until you find an age that seems right. six, yeah, that's you. You're Jade, and today you're six years old, ready to take on the world with everything you have.
---
Your name is Dave Strider, and you feel hazy. Your head hurts, and your body feels weak. You don't want to think about what caused it. Something feels wrong about you, like your body is too big for you. Childish, maybe? You're not very sure, but what you are sure of, is that you shouldn't be doing it. It's not like you. Nobody needs to see you like this, not even yourself. You need to get over it, you don't have time for childish garbage. You never did, so why start now? It's dumb, even ironically. But even then, you feel... no. No, you can't.
The Reader finally got the ending it wanted, and it is determined to protect that timeline. But sometimes the feeling of being alone against the world is hard to handle. The emotions build up and you end up cracking.
Of course, he always has to crack at the 'worst' moment.
Le Reader a enfin obtenu la fin qui lui convenait, et il est bien dcid protger cette chronologie. Mais parfois, la sensation d'tre seul contre le monde est difficile grer. Les motions s'accumulent et on fini par craquer.
videmment, il doit toujours craquer au 'pire' moment.
MSPA Reader is superb at maintaining and mending friendships, and they were perhaps the bearer of vast knowledge on every type of friendships that existed.
But Rose and Kanaya's friendship was the oddest.
3a8082e126