http://allisonmcosgrove.blogspot.com/2010/01/doorman-flash-fiction-friday.html
Enjoy!
http://512words.blogspot.com/2010/01/within-sight.html
And some notes, if you're interested in the "big idea" behind this one:
http://snout.org/hotsheet/2010/01/friday-flash-fiction-within-sight.html
Cheers,
~CKL