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Dark Touch
Aug 2, 2010, 1:50:59 PM8/2/10
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Nice.
A couple of thoughts:
1. The second lightning bolt is a little lame. It just sort of happens with no real explanation especially not when compared with how awesome it would be to be part of that FIRST kite experiment.
2. I know that's just a picture, but the actual silver bolt is pretty cool. I'd love to see that worked into the writeup. Even if you're just hitting someone over the head with a silver staff. Another option would be to tie the silver staff to the origin of his powers.. it is the lightning rod that attracted the special lightning to begin with or something. AP: Shoots lightning bolts by superfast creating static?
3. The really high bluff skill doesn't feel right for someone with his level of insecurity. Maybe shift it to Acrobatics and give him the Acrobatic Bluff feat so he can bluff and trick by superfast dodging and jumping rather than with his smart mouth.
A couple of thoughts:
1. The second lightning bolt is a little lame. It just sort of happens with no real explanation especially not when compared with how awesome it would be to be part of that FIRST kite experiment.
2. I know that's just a picture, but the actual silver bolt is pretty cool. I'd love to see that worked into the writeup. Even if you're just hitting someone over the head with a silver staff. Another option would be to tie the silver staff to the origin of his powers.. it is the lightning rod that attracted the special lightning to begin with or something. AP: Shoots lightning bolts by superfast creating static?
3. The really high bluff skill doesn't feel right for someone with his level of insecurity. Maybe shift it to Acrobatics and give him the Acrobatic Bluff feat so he can bluff and trick by superfast dodging and jumping rather than with his smart mouth.
On Fri, Jul 30, 2010 at 5:32 PM, Kennon Bauman <kennon...@gmail.com> wrote:
...to check out a new character for my Culper Ring games. Does this look like a decent build? Does the story make sense?
--Kennon C. Bauman
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Aug 2, 2010, 6:11:59 PM8/2/10
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The second lightning bolt was meant to be a reference to the wally west/barry allen ridiculousness.
Great suggestions. Much appreciated
Great suggestions. Much appreciated
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