Leo-
I'm trying to remember what I had in my head for this. I do remember some of it, but I had more. Maybe it will come to me again if I don't try so hard to recall it. I should have written this down when I had it clear in my head. Notice the change I made to your first verse:
V1Stand up and sing and dance with me
Release your mind and fly in a dream
Close your eyes and raise your hands
Let your body move
ChorusFeel the music deep inside
Follow the lights in your fantasy
Throw off the chains and you can be free
For all your Life
V2Send up some love it helps the feel
And use this song to make all real
Show us your voice and make it loud
Let your body move
ChorusI didn't mix your last vocal because I knew we were still working on lyrics.
Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 28, 2009 1:05 PM