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I still have work to do on this but at least I got it all the way through the song. I will go at it fresh tomorrow, and no doubt make your voxless mix...
Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 6, 2009 7:03 PM
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I still have work to do on this but at least I got it all the way through the song. I will go at it fresh tomorrow, and no doubt make your voxless mix...
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Leo-
I'd like to make a suggestion to change part of the lyrics. I suggest to change "Blow up the chains and you can be free", to "Throw off the chains and you can be free". So "blow up" becomes "throw off".
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I'd like to make a suggestion to change part of the lyrics. I suggest to change "Blow up the chains and you can be free", to "Throw off the chains and you can be free". So "blow up" becomes "throw off".
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1oneleo said...
"I dont know the chords exactly... I'll draw it at home and send to you cause I dont know the names, I palyed it creating the chords based in what I hear."
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I have appointments this a.m. but when I get back into the studio I want to work up the chords for this. As I got more into the bass I realized that the chords don't feel right against your voice on this. So when I get back into the studio I will get the guitar out and try to make it right. I am quite sure I know what to do to fix this. We'll see once i get in there... More later...
Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 9, 2009 6:31 AM
1oneleo said...
"I dont know the chords exactly... I'll draw it at home and send to you cause I dont know the names, I palyed it creating the chords based in what I hear."
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I have appointments this a.m. but when I get back into the studio I want to work up the chords for this. As I got more into the bass I realized that the chords don't feel right against your voice on this. So when I get back into the studio I will get the guitar out and try to make it right. I am quite sure I know what to do to fix this. We'll see once i get in there... More later...
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Hello brows!! I´m very busy these days, a lot of changes in my office.
Fred, I´ll change the lyrics, the next take will be recorded with the modification.
The guitar and vocal needs to be changed to enter in the wheather...
You will try to do the base guitar? I´ll prepare another one too, but not yet.
Posted by 1oneleo to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 9, 2009 5:38 PM
Hello brows!! I´m very busy these days, a lot of changes in my office.
Fred, I´ll change the lyrics, the next take will be recorded with the modification.
The guitar and vocal needs to be changed to enter in the wheather...
You will try to do the base guitar? I´ll prepare another one too, but not yet.
Posted by 1oneleo to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 9, 2009 5:38 PM
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Leo-
I didn't get any studio time today. I'll try to post a mix for you to sing against tomorrow. I know you said you want a mix wether it's finished or not (bass & guitar). Hope to get this for you tomorrow. Have a good night!
Go Wings!
Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 9, 2009 7:53 PM
Leo-
I didn't get any studio time today. I'll try to post a mix for you to sing against tomorrow. I know you said you want a mix wether it's finished or not (bass & guitar). Hope to get this for you tomorrow. Have a good night!
Go Wings!
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I didn't change the chords you are using Leo. Rather I just changed the arrangement you were using. There was just one place that needed to change back to an earlier chord. Under where you sing "L--I--F--E". The very last chord you had in there didn't change back, before you started the progression again, and now it does change back. It suits this better the way it is now if you ask me. Have a listen and see if you agree. I may come back and do the very end of the song again on the bass, to add some more to it. I am hitting single notes on the bass on the ending now. It's ok, but I could add some more flare to it. I didn't work on the bass at all today. I took awhile and setup all my guitar etc, and then realized I didn't need to redo the guitar. You had all the parts there, they just needed to be arranged. So that's what I did. Just the one chord going back to the earlier chord, where your original arrangement didn't change back at the end of the progression (under the word LIFE, where you hold it). I'm liking this now... suits my ear...
Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 10, 2009 12:27 PM
I didn't change the chords you are using Leo. Rather I just changed the arrangement you were using. There was just one place that needed to change back to an earlier chord. Under where you sing "L--I--F--E". The very last chord you had in there didn't change back, before you started the progression again, and now it does change back. It suits this better the way it is now if you ask me. Have a listen and see if you agree. I may come back and do the very end of the song again on the bass, to add some more to it. I am hitting single notes on the bass on the ending now. It's ok, but I could add some more flare to it. I didn't work on the bass at all today. I took awhile and setup all my guitar etc, and then realized I didn't need to redo the guitar. You had all the parts there, they just needed to be arranged. So that's what I did. Just the one chord going back to the earlier chord, where your original arrangement didn't change back at the end of the progression (under the word LIFE, where you hold it). I'm liking this now... suits my ear...
Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 10, 2009 12:27 PM
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Fred, I´m hearing it now...this version is rearanged? Its sounding good to me...well you did a great job, the music was born very simple with nothing special, no variations, but the bass and percursion gives a new atmosphere... I´ll rec another take tomorrow and send to you for mix, I was thinking, the AC idea of a flute line is very interesting, can agregate a new feel and turn it more original.
Great Job, I´m very satisfied with the results, AC, can you prepare somethink for us?
I´ll send the vocal..no FX tomorrow!
The end bass part...its different, can stay this idea, its like a flag(advertising) for the end, sound good too.
Posted by 1oneleo to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 10, 2009 9:11 PM
Fred, I´m hearing it now...this version is rearanged? Its sounding good to me...well you did a great job, the music was born very simple with nothing special, no variations, but the bass and percursion gives a new atmosphere... I´ll rec another take tomorrow and send to you for mix, I was thinking, the AC idea of a flute line is very interesting, can agregate a new feel and turn it more original.
Great Job, I´m very satisfied with the results, AC, can you prepare somethink for us?
I´ll send the vocal..no FX tomorrow!
The end bass part...its different, can stay this idea, its like a flag(advertising) for the end, sound good too.
Posted by 1oneleo to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 10, 2009 9:11 PM
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1oneleo said...
"Fred, I´m hearing it now...this version is rearanged? Its sounding good to me...well you did a great job, the music was born very simple with nothing special, no variations, but the bass and percursion gives a new atmosphere..."
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Yes I just made a very small change to the chord arrangement. I put in one chord under the word L--I--F--E, where you used another. Just the one chord change. That would be considered a change in the chord arrangement yes. Actually your vocal pointed the way to this chord change, but I didn't identify it until I began working on the bass line. Sounds fine now. I may do some more work on the dynamics of the bass, but it will not change what I have in place now very much. I'd like to hear the builds done better in my bass. I'd like to hear the bass build up under the word L--I--F--E, but that is "icing on the cake" as they say. I can do that later.
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1oneleo said...
"AC, can you prepare somethink for us?"
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Flute would be interesting. You're up AC.
Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 11, 2009 6:46 AM
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1oneleo said...
"Fred, I´m hearing it now...this version is rearanged? Its sounding good to me...well you did a great job, the music was born very simple with nothing special, no variations, but the bass and percursion gives a new atmosphere..."
Yes I just made a very small change to the chord arrangement. I put in one chord under the word L--I--F--E, where you used another. Just the one chord change. That would be considered a change in the chord arrangement yes. Actually your vocal pointed the way to this chord change, but I didn't identify it until I began working on the bass line. Sounds fine now. I may do some more work on the dynamics of the bass, but it will not change what I have in place now very much. I'd like to hear the builds done better in my bass. I'd like to hear the bass build up under the word L--I--F--E, but that is "icing on the cake" as they say. I can do that later.
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1oneleo said...
"AC, can you prepare somethink for us?"
Flute would be interesting. You're up AC.
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Fred, I uploaded the new vocal take in the separated folder, there´s a optional backing vocal you can use if you think if wear right on this song, and send me a feedback cause I can do another try if this vox aint good.
I´ll go to the beach in this hollyday, but at evening, will be out for 2 days...to rest a little...but I´m feelling well now! What a week...hehehe
Posted by 1oneleo to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 11, 2009 7:37 AM
Fred, I uploaded the new vocal take in the separated folder, there´s a optional backing vocal you can use if you think if wear right on this song, and send me a feedback cause I can do another try if this vox aint good.
I´ll go to the beach in this hollyday, but at evening, will be out for 2 days...to rest a little...but I´m feelling well now! What a week...hehehe
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Ok Leo, I'll grab the vox and do a mix soon. Enjoy your time at the beach. You deserve a break!
Cheers!
Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 11, 2009 7:43 AM
Ok Leo, I'll grab the vox and do a mix soon. Enjoy your time at the beach. You deserve a break!
Cheers!
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Leo-
You have control over the files for this project. If you feel like it you could go through and delete old and un-used files from the folders...
No hurry.... Just wanted to remind you that you have control of the files...
Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 11, 2009 7:44 AM
You have control over the files for this project. If you feel like it you could go through and delete old and un-used files from the folders...
No hurry.... Just wanted to remind you that you have control of the files...
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New vox mixed...
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New vox mixed...
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just uploaded a flute audition. Any suggestions on bettering it are welcome. I'll upload separate as soon as any possible problems are corrected. Strangely don't seem to be able to post the link. the file is Lights in Fantasy flute3
Posted by ac to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 14, 2009 6:08 AM
just uploaded a flute audition. Any suggestions on bettering it are welcome. I'll upload separate as soon as any possible problems are corrected. Strangely don't seem to be able to post the link. the file is Lights in Fantasy flute3
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AC-
After uploading it is usually slow to put up a link to the file for me. I can usually force it to give me the link by clicking the folder I uploaded into on the left hand side. Once I click that folder on the left it usually gives me the link right away. Something to remember next time you upload.
Cool.
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AC-
After uploading it is usually slow to put up a link to the file for me. I can usually force it to give me the link by clicking the folder I uploaded into on the left hand side. Once I click that folder on the left it usually gives me the link right away. Something to remember next time you upload.
Cool.
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always learning mate!! I'll keep it in mind.
Posted by ac to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 14, 2009 7:34 AM
always learning mate!! I'll keep it in mind.
Posted by ac to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 14, 2009 7:34 AM
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1oneleo has left a new comment on your post "(Pop/Rock) Lights In Fantasy (Drums, Bass, Keys, L...":
I hear the last mix today, it is the same vocal line of the last one. I have to cleanup my mind to sing another kind of vocal, but we can use this as reference for now...
I´m curious to hear the Flute mix :-)
Soon I post another vox!
Posted by 1oneleo to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 15, 2009 4:49 AM
I hear the last mix today, it is the same vocal line of the last one. I have to cleanup my mind to sing another kind of vocal, but we can use this as reference for now...
I´m curious to hear the Flute mix :-)
Soon I post another vox!
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Blogger 1oneleo said...
I hear the last mix today, it is the same vocal line of the last one. I have to cleanup my mind to sing another kind of vocal, but we can use this as reference for now...
I´m curious to hear the Flute mix :-)
Soon I post another vox!
Leo-
It's the vocal that you sent me just before you left, mixed there. I agree that clearing your mind and another take would be good. I was not able to make the backing vocal you sent work. Looking forward to what you come up with in the future.
Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 15, 2009 7:02 AM
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Blogger 1oneleo said...
I hear the last mix today, it is the same vocal line of the last one. I have to cleanup my mind to sing another kind of vocal, but we can use this as reference for now...
I´m curious to hear the Flute mix :-)
Soon I post another vox!
June 15, 2009 4:49 AM
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It's the vocal that you sent me just before you left, mixed there. I agree that clearing your mind and another take would be good. I was not able to make the backing vocal you sent work. Looking forward to what you come up with in the future.
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Hehehe...now I found the flute mix... cool.
Well, It´s very clear I have to change completely the vocals, because the song take a soft way and the flute gives a complement for the vocal, i dont have to sustain the final notes anymore. I´ll try to do something light and with chorus... I´m getting the way..
Fred, the latest mix button on quickstart page is a great idea!
Posted by 1oneleo to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 15, 2009 8:28 AM
Hehehe...now I found the flute mix... cool.
Well, It´s very clear I have to change completely the vocals, because the song take a soft way and the flute gives a complement for the vocal, i dont have to sustain the final notes anymore. I´ll try to do something light and with chorus... I´m getting the way..
Fred, the latest mix button on quickstart page is a great idea!
Posted by 1oneleo to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 15, 2009 8:28 AM
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Leo-
I don't know if a lot of people realize this but the streaming player that 4shared.com puts on each page for each track uploaded, is embedable. They give us the code to embed the player for each track on any page we want. So I had thought to put this player on the quickstart page, for latest mix.
If you look at the STATUS window at the top of this project's page (click the title of this project in the notification e-mail), you'll see how the embeded player can be used. I even have control over the size of it. Take a look! This 4shared.com service is a godsend for us! You could never ask for a better free service to give you 5 gigs for free, and full control of the files. I love that service!
Yes I will be putting these players on the quickstart as time permits. Also in the STATUS window of each page.
I am thinking to move the members pictures to a different page that is at the bottom of the quickstart, so it opens faster. Always new ideas in my head to make life better here at F-Jam.
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Leo-
I don't know if a lot of people realize this but the streaming player that 4shared.com puts on each page for each track uploaded, is embedable. They give us the code to embed the player for each track on any page we want. So I had thought to put this player on the quickstart page, for latest mix.
If you look at the STATUS window at the top of this project's page (click the title of this project in the notification e-mail), you'll see how the embeded player can be used. I even have control over the size of it. Take a look! This 4shared.com service is a godsend for us! You could never ask for a better free service to give you 5 gigs for free, and full control of the files. I love that service!
Yes I will be putting these players on the quickstart as time permits. Also in the STATUS window of each page.
I am thinking to move the members pictures to a different page that is at the bottom of the quickstart, so it opens faster. Always new ideas in my head to make life better here at F-Jam.
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Leo-
Since you have accepted AC's flute, audition, we will announce it, and add him to the roster. Nice one AC.
Leo-
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Guys-
His flute doesn't indicate singing softer if you ask me. AC's idea works, but might need to give the vocals a little more room. The feel seems to work as I listen, but in places it feels like it's competing with the vox. I'll have to listen some more. I didn't think you need to sing softer Leo. Just my opinion. Of course I could change my opinion once I heard your idea sung.
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Guys-
His flute doesn't indicate singing softer if you ask me. AC's idea works, but might need to give the vocals a little more room. The feel seems to work as I listen, but in places it feels like it's competing with the vox. I'll have to listen some more. I didn't think you need to sing softer Leo. Just my opinion. Of course I could change my opinion once I heard your idea sung.
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It occurs to me that maybe AC's flute should be an octave higher, to set it apart from the octave of the guitar. I'd like to suggest AC doing something similare but an octave higher. Just to test how it sits in the mix. The vocals, and the guitar are all in the same octave range. If the flute is too it doesn't complement like it could Can we try a similar take but an octave higher? Just putting out ideas...
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Taking in all the comments and suggestions and I like the idea of the playing it an octave higher. will give it a go tonight and see what comes out. The competing with the vocals thing also worried me as I was playing. I tried to make it simple so as to complement and not compete but if any of the phrasings don't work too well we can always change them. I'll upload a new flute mix tonight.
Posted by ac to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 15, 2009 9:12 AM
Taking in all the comments and suggestions and I like the idea of the playing it an octave higher. will give it a go tonight and see what comes out. The competing with the vocals thing also worried me as I was playing. I tried to make it simple so as to complement and not compete but if any of the phrasings don't work too well we can always change them. I'll upload a new flute mix tonight.
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Leo-
My latest mix uses a different vocal than did AC. He used an older mix for flute audition.
It feels like he is letting to flute go into a different key too. He seems to go into a different key in places... The idea flies though.
Posted by F-Jam Alert to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 15, 2009 9:15 AM
Leo-
My latest mix uses a different vocal than did AC. He used an older mix for flute audition.
It feels like he is letting to flute go into a different key too. He seems to go into a different key in places... The idea flies though.
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Check out the status window for this project. I've added AC to the roster for flute, and updated the latest mix. This illustrates how the streaming player can go right into the status window. The download button is now direct instead of opening the 4shared page (I think). THis last part you guys should test out for me (the download button).
If you guys give we liscense to work with the arrangement I might be able to help the competition thing. I'm going by gut feeling 9instinct), and I could be wrong. I'm just adding ideas that could help the overall production.
If you dont aree with something I'm saying, it's cool. We go with leo's decisions on all of this. It's his baby. Just trying to help. I do think the flute gives it a good feel. Just need to find the right sounds.
Leo here is the latest mix I posted. AC used an older mix. I worked on the bass a bit too:
http://www.4shared.com/file/111470843/7384e479/Lights_In_Fantasy_New_Vox.html<---Click this
Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 15, 2009 9:29 AM
Check out the status window for this project. I've added AC to the roster for flute, and updated the latest mix. This illustrates how the streaming player can go right into the status window. The download button is now direct instead of opening the 4shared page (I think). THis last part you guys should test out for me (the download button).
If you guys give we liscense to work with the arrangement I might be able to help the competition thing. I'm going by gut feeling 9instinct), and I could be wrong. I'm just adding ideas that could help the overall production.
If you dont aree with something I'm saying, it's cool. We go with leo's decisions on all of this. It's his baby. Just trying to help. I do think the flute gives it a good feel. Just need to find the right sounds.
Leo here is the latest mix I posted. AC used an older mix. I worked on the bass a bit too:
http://www.4shared.com/file/111470843/7384e479/Lights_In_Fantasy_New_Vox.html<---Click this
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Leo-
You should write a 2nd verse instead of repeating the 1st. The chorus is fine as is the first verse. It'll complete the package if you write a 2nd verse.
If you want to do that but have trouble, you could maybe ask Phil to write a 2nd verse for you. He's very good, and it wouldn't hurt to have co-writer on the lyrics...
I can tell you how to contact him if you need it. he does very good work. He wrote the lyrics on "From the Other Side", that you auditioned for.
I think it'd help this to not repeat the first verse...
Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 15, 2009 9:44 AM
You should write a 2nd verse instead of repeating the 1st. The chorus is fine as is the first verse. It'll complete the package if you write a 2nd verse.
If you want to do that but have trouble, you could maybe ask Phil to write a 2nd verse for you. He's very good, and it wouldn't hurt to have co-writer on the lyrics...
I can tell you how to contact him if you need it. he does very good work. He wrote the lyrics on "From the Other Side", that you auditioned for.
I think it'd help this to not repeat the first verse...
Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 15, 2009 9:44 AM
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The first title on the QUICKSTART page (this project) now has the LATEST MIX linked if you want to see what I am working on.
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Is not hard to develop another verse for this song, the lyric formula is simple using simple words... all opened to receive a co-writer, and I know some other Phil songs...definitively great!
I´ll post some ideas for a 2nd verse too.
The download button turns easy de access to last mix...and the embeded player to...good idea!
Posted by 1oneleo to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 15, 2009 12:39 PM
Is not hard to develop another verse for this song, the lyric formula is simple using simple words... all opened to receive a co-writer, and I know some other Phil songs...definitively great!
I´ll post some ideas for a 2nd verse too.
The download button turns easy de access to last mix...and the embeded player to...good idea!
Posted by 1oneleo to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 15, 2009 12:39 PM
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