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1oneleo has left a new comment on your post "(Pop) No Time To Waste (Pop, Bass, Drums, Keys, Le...":

Hi Fred! how are you...ok?
I´m posting the 2nd verse...I think it will need some corrections, I´m a little tired today, maybe some things dont make sense...but here it is:

(after ooo heart can taste...)

All these years
Playing alone
The same game

I´m tired of wacth my tries go wrong
I run, go fast but I´m always slow

Run for free like never before
Try to Fly high but I still hit the floor

If I could get one wing from the Lord
Ill fly for ever and complain no more

But
I lost my inocense
I lost my inocense

Just a pagan carring in my back
The world of living in a one way track

ooo
No time to waste
ooo
No time to waste



Posted by 1oneleo to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 27, 2009 9:37 PM

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1oneleo has left a new comment on your post "(Pop) No Time To Waste (Pop, Bass, Drums, Keys, Le...":

Tomorow I´ll rec the base and post here...we can start to develop this song!
I hope you are right.
cheers



Posted by 1oneleo to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 27, 2009 9:39 PM

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1oneleo has left a new comment on your post "(Pop) No Time To Waste (Pop, Bass, Drums, Keys, Le...":

Tomorow I´ll rec the base and post it here...we can start to develop this song!
I hope you be good, and everyting is ok with you!
cheers



Posted by 1oneleo to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 27, 2009 9:44 PM

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Keeper has left a new comment on your post "(Pop) No Time To Waste (Pop, Bass, Drums, Keys, Le...":

Hi Leo-

I'm trying to get caught up after some time with no power here. Storms came through and knocked down power lines, so we went for some time with no city power. I have a good new generator, so we ran that while it was off, but the internet cable had no power. I could run my freezer/fridge, fans, DVD, lights etc, and I have a cell phone, so we had the basics, but no internet, so I was off here for awhile.

It's back now. We have this happen a couple times a year, so it's good I own a generator. I wish we had our power lines underground like a lot of people do.



Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 28, 2009 6:27 AM

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Keeper has left a new comment on your post "(Pop) No Time To Waste (Pop, Bass, Drums, Keys, Le...":

I am seeing some things in the lyrics that I would recommend. I want to get my thoughts together and I will say...

Cool...



Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 28, 2009 6:29 AM

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1oneleo has left a new comment on your post "(Pop) No Time To Waste (Pop, Bass, Drums, Keys, Le...":

Now is changing seasons, its time for the storms there?
I hope it stops soon... I´m searching for a new job, new city, then means, no rush for the songs...but we´ll working as we can.
Take care friend!



Posted by 1oneleo to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 28, 2009 7:29 AM

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Keeper has left a new comment on your post "(Pop) No Time To Waste (Pop, Bass, Drums, Keys, Le...":

It's summer time here. Lots of storms. We have such problems when it is hot, and cold as well. Having the electric wires on poles is not a good idea anymore here.

At least I could keep my freezer running and not have food spoilage. I have it better than a lot of people so I try not to complain.

I saw an old friend two days ago, who is afraid of loosing his home and becoming homeless. My problems are small compared to his.

Yes this job you have seems to devour you Leo. It would be good for you to have a job that allows you to enjoy life a little more. So I understand your decision for a new job. I believe it is a good move Leo. You will become old before your time with your present job. I can feel your stress at this one. I wish you all the best.

As you see i don't push your time Leo. As long as we speak and know what is going on you can take all the time you need and not worry about it stopping. I like to take my own times as well. No pressure from me.

You are doing well with your communications, so don't push yourself for the time. When you get to it you get to it. Just don't be silent for too long and don't worry the schedule.



Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 28, 2009 7:40 AM

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Keeper has left a new comment on your post "(Pop) No Time To Waste (Pop, Bass, Drums, Keys, Le...":

Leo-

If you would put all of your lyrics for this into ONE layout (verse, chorus etc), I will go over them and make recommendations for some changes. I'd also like to hear it sung (when you get time).



Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 30, 2009 10:25 AM

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Keeper has left a new comment on your post "(Pop) No Time To Waste (Pop, Bass, Drums, Keys, Le...":

Leo-

I got the lyrics outline you sent via e-mail. I'll work on this tomorrow when i get into the studio. It's late here now. Tomorrow is another day!



Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at June 30, 2009 8:44 PM

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Keeper has left a new comment on your post "(Pop) No Time To Waste (Pop, Bass, Drums, Keys, Le...":

Ok I tried not to change your meaning too far Leo. The changes I made are to help flow and to help it make more sense from a grammar point of view. I hope this suits you:

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---Verse
I wanna try
Wanna feel
Damm again
I want to live like days before
When I was boy and always look for more
I want these days but they go by
I lost my inocence and body feels
Like a dream we claim for more
Your eyes get open and you close the door
You lost your inocense
You lost your inocense
Like the first time you touch the love
A brand new flavor that your heart can taste
-- Ref --

ooo
No time to waste
ooo
No time to waste

---Verse

All these years
Playing alone
The same game
I´m tired of wacth my tries go wrong

I run go fast but I´m always slow

Run for free like never before
Try to Fly high but I still hit the floor
If I could get one wing from the Lord
Ill fly for ever and complain no more
But
I lost my inocense
I lost my inocense
Just a pagan carring in my back
The world of living in a one way track

-- Ref --

ooo
No time to waste
ooo
No time to waste

...many times needed

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Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at July 1, 2009 7:02 AM

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Keeper has left a new comment on your post "(Pop) No Time To Waste (Pop, Bass, Drums, Keys, Le...":

Ooops I posted the unchanged lyrics. My bad. Here is the edited version:

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---Verse
I wanna try
Wanna feel
Damm again
I want to live like days before

When I was boy and always looked for more
I want those days but they are gone

I lost my inocence and body feels

Like a dream I want for more
My eyes get opened and you close the door

You lost your inocense
You lost your inocense
Like the first time you touch the love
A brand new flavor that your heart can taste
-- Ref --
ooo
No time to waste
ooo
No time to waste
---Verse
All these years
Playing alone
The same game

I'm tired of wacthing my tries go wrong
I run so fast but alas it's slow
Running free like never before
Try to fly high but I hit the floor
If I am lifted from the Lord

Ill fly for ever and complain no more
But
I lost my inocense
I lost my inocense

Just a pagan carry on my back
The world of living on a one way track

-- Ref --
ooo
No time to waste
ooo
No time to waste

...many times I've needed
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Posted by Keeper to F-Jam Online Music Collaboration Studios at July 1, 2009 7:10 AM