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==================================
Sidonia no Kishi 14
==================================

vol3 chap14 page 111 of the Japanese edition

The immortal ship Committee | The eternal living crew

Visual motif of the Sidonia #11: Secret Passage in the pilot quarters



[112]

1 I am sorry, Raraa, as a gentleman I shouldn't let a girl carry such
heavy equipment.
2 Hey, you know, I don't like it to be called by my given name.
3 If you do that again, I pull your neck long.
4 You are cute, Raraa

[113]

1 Grrrrr
2 Kobayashi...
3 Don't pull such a face. It's a simple investigation mission.
Collecting raw material is
much more dangerous.
4 Besides that, this is a chance, to carve our names in the history
books.
5 But it is a construction of unknown origin with lateral length of
several kilometers.
6 What if it was made by the Gaunas?

[114]

1 This wasn't done by a Gauna.
2 They don't have the culture nor the brains to make such a thing.
3 That's not sure, Hiroki.
4 Besides that, none of us has seen a real Ganua till now.
5 It's time.
6 Everyone enters its Morito and waits in standby.^
7 This is mission control. The shuttle will land soon.
8 Everyone puts on his helmet except Ochiai, who has let make many
body modifications.
9 Ochiai, you have made really a lot of that.
0 Water-based lenses but are now also something of yesteryear.


[115]
[116]
[117]
[118]

[119]

1 Nothing to see.
2 To do investigation right here is of no use. This is just some
place.
3 We have to enter and look for ourselves.
4 I know, that's why we are here.

[120]

1 Can you hear me?
2 Yes
3 loud and clear
4 mw, too
5 The voice radio is still working, I guess.
5 !?
6 This hole....Can't detect Higgs particles any more.

[121]

1 as expected.... that's not the usual
2 Within 600 meters there is no movement except ours
3 we keep the course to the center.
4 It's beautiful in here, somehow.
5 so quiet...
6 Yes
7 To me it looks like an artificial coral reef.
8 !
9 Look, down over there
0 There is a crack. The colour is different from anywhere else.

[122]

1 What's that?
2 Something oozes out of the crack.
3 Be carefully, Suzuki
4 Don't worry, Kobayashi. I just investigate.

[123]

1 The hole is full of this paleness
2 What's the matter, Suzuki?
3 There is something...
4 an oviform of 5 meters diameter
5 What?
6 !!
7 .....

[124]

1 My machine isn't moving anymore.
2 !!??
3 I am losing Higgs-particles.
4 !!!

[125]

1 Suzuki!
2 Suzuki has been swallowed?
3 Suzuki!!

[126]

1 What? Suzuki's face..
2 Heaven...
3 Suzuki has been swallowed
4 A Gauna has appeared.
5 ..............
6 So, that's a Gauna......

[127]

1 Get out of there, Kobayashi
2 !!
3 ..............................

[128]

1 I kill you
2 Saito!!

[129]

1 Kobayashi!!
2 Are you ok, Saito?
3 I am ok, please have a look after Kobayashi
4 to all, listen
The Higgsparticel are intercepted over there.
5 If you are able to tear off the placenta, the Gauna will be put to a
halt
There is danger to the Sidonia, if it leaves. The Gauna has to be
kept there.
6 Was!
7 Yes
8 I have the intention to do so for sure
9 Don't be silly. The Gauna has an estimated mass of 500 tons. How
shall we pull
that off with just two tsugimoris(Mechas)?
0 Come back, Kobyashi.

[130]

1 Just as it is written in the textbooks
2 The main body has not even a scratch.

[131]

1 aaarrgghhh

[132]

1 Take this

The inscription on the muzzle says,
Toha Heavy Industries Higgs-Particle-Acceleration-Cannon Prototype
Toha = Toua = Eastasia

[133]

1 Raraa!!
2 It is futile.
3 Ochiai, give the order to retreat.
4 Message from the Sidonia, Ochiai. The ship's cannon is about to
fire.
5 Certainly even the heavy mass cannon can't destroy a Gauna.
But if they don't do something, we shall die all here.

[134]
[135]

1 We never can pull off the placenta.
2 Down there is a shining light.
3 That has to be the center.
4 Probably is the center connected to all holes. If we are cleverly,
we may escape. Retreat!

[136]

1 What's that?
2 Shining grains?

[137]
[138]
[139]

1 These grains!
2 They pierced the main body of the Gauna.

[140]

1 That's how we became heroes, because we were the first humans on the
Sidonia, which were able to defeat a Gauna
2 Kobayashi has been appointed to captain after that and this alarming
research for eternal youth and eternal life begun.

[141]

1 This shining grains, which were able to penetrate the main body of
the Gaunas, have been named "kabi", which is an old word for the
rice ear.
2 These Kabi couldn't be connected or processed by any other material.
But they cling to the flesh of placenta of the Gauna.
3 That's how the Kabizashi were made. The only weapon we have to hunt
down the Gaunas. And that is also the reason, why we have only a
very
limited number of them.
4 600 years have past since, and we still don't know, who built that
structure and what the reason for it's existence was.
Text in the picture: kabi - placenta - handle

[142]

1 There
2 Nagate, hurry
3 For what should this be good?
4 Mrs. Hiyama likes it.
Doesn't she always takes good care of you?
5 Yes, I know.
6 Hihihi

[143]

1 Raraa
2 Miss
3 ui
4 Hiro!!
5 That's all?
Usually she loses it, when someone is so frank to her.
6 eeh, well,
7 Izana thought...
8 oh, no

[144]

1 wha
2 !

[145]

1 aaaaah
2 Now I have run super glue into the joint
3 What a scream... a monster?
4 I am sorry, Mrs. Hiyama.


End of chapter 14

Keiji

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==================================
Sidonia no Kishi 15
=================================



vol 3 page 146 Japanese edition

(from top to bottom)

1 main body
2 placenta

3 Gauna
Extraterrestrial life form that consists
of a main body and a placenta. By consuming
the Higgs particles, which are stored in
the main body, it can grow the placenta in
any shape. In the universe there is an
endless supply of Higgs particles, therefore
the main body can always produce new placenta,
as long as it isn't destroyed. The main body
can only destroyed by a kabizashi spear.

4 mass association ship | mother ship
(It produces individual Gaunas.)
A tremendous amount of Gauna, which have
connected with their placentas, make the
nest of the Gaunas. The one, which has
destroyed our solar system, has been bigger
than the moon. The small mass association ship,
which is currently embroiled in fights with
the Sidonia, has about 56 million tons, and
is home to about 5000 Gaunas.

5 Transverse cut of a mass association ship



Sidonia no Kishi 15

[147]

1 Story No. 15 Saito Hiroki freaks out
2 Visual motifs of the Sidonia # 12:
Back of the pilot quarters.

[148]

1 100 years ago, at the time of the last war
with the Gaunas, precisely during the last
stages of the 4th Defense War against the
Gaunas...

2 ...the Kabizashis were marooned in space
by the arbitrariness of the member of the
immortal crew Ochiai.

3 The Sidonia lost its sole defense weapon,
and Gaunas infiltrated the ship.

[149]

1 In the few minutes, which it took Saito
Hiroki to crush with his "Tsugimori" (Mecha)
the two Gaunas, which have invaded the ship...

2 ...99 % of the inhabitants of the Sidonia
were devoured.

[150]

box Bridge of the Sidonia
meeting room in the ship's shell

1 Captain....

[151]

1 We finished the rescue of the last survivors.

2 24 members of the immortal crew and
392 ordinary sailors...
3 ...that's the complete population of the
Sidonia now.

4 The crew is 25 persons
5 You forgot Ochiai

6 It was you, Kobayashi, who ordered to catch
him alive.

7 Hiro...

[152]

1 How often I have to explain it to you, Saito
2 Ochiai has deleted most of Sidonia's library

3 and he has copied all the records into the
auxiliary memory of his brain.

[153]

1 !

2 You there, what made you light a fire?
3 Are you brainless?

4 Today is Gravity Festival.
5 Don't be so strict.

[154]

1 It is no big deal to cut the connection to the
auxiliary memory.

2 But it is impossible to access the memory from
outside.
3 Ochiai's brain of flesh and blood is the key
to this purpose.

4 You are really good. What's your name?
5 Shinatose Yure. Thank you.

[155]

1 The difficult separation of the auxiliary memory
was successful.
2 As next Ochiai's fleshy brain has to be transferred
into a clone.
That shouldn't be problem.

3 But there is another difficulty. Ochiai's auxiliary
memory is a new invention, he made himself.
4 Now in it is stored the complete record keeping of
the Sidonia.
5 It can't work as a stand alone device. It can
only accessed via Ochiai's fleshy brain.

6 No problem. I don't think that it can be misused.
7 His memory has been erased with all available methods.

[156]

1 Captain Kobayashi
2 Nice to meet you.

[157]

1 The plan is to grow the population within
6 generations and 100 years to an amount
of 500.000 people.
2 We are lucky to have enough raw material
at hand to produce the necessary embryos.

3 Dr. Shinatose
4 These figures...well, in the first generation
no one has to be in the parent's role. We all want
to do as best we can, but we are at war, how
shall we take care of so many people?

5 There is a minimum number to create a stable
gene pool.

6 Will the food be rationed? We don't know, how
long it will take, to rebuild the infrastructure.
7 Do you know, what a pain it is to raise children?

[158]

1 But this children are very easy-care.
2 They live by photosynthesis.

3 Photosynthesis?

4 That's how it is. Please, don't be scared only.
5 How many days haven't we seen a Gauna?
Perhaps they vanish, as they have done in the past.

1 And that's how it was.
2 The small mass association ship changed its course
and disappeared to somewhere.

3 The plan was set into motion.
4 The abilities of the girl were recognised and short
after she became a member of the immortal crew.

[159]

box 14 years ago

sign junk goods

[160]

1 Mr. Saito

2 80 years, apparently, I guess.
3 Everybody is concerned, especially Raraa
4 cough

5 The ageing proceeds, doesn't it?
6 You have taken the anti-ageing medicine not even once?

7 If we wait any longer, it maybe too late.
8 Let's go.

[161]

1 la lalalala
2 Do you know, how the gnats, the cockroaches, and the
moths made it to the Sidonia?

3 Hurry! I found Saito Hiroki.

[162]

1 Hiroki !!

[163]

1 We found him collapsed in front of the bio converter reactor.

2 Therefore...what about Hiroki's condition?
3 We worried but his brain isn't affected by the ageing.

4 But, when he dies now, it wouldn't be something unusual.
That is the current status.
We do, what we can, but there is no way to reverse ageing.

5 No matter what, we have to transplant his brain into
a clone. That is urgent.
6 ...............

7 Is there a problem?

8 His replacement clone was lost during the commotions
of the 4th war.

9 But he rejected to make a new one
0 and he left without letting a single usable cell behind.

(Translator's Explanation: A converter reactor is a
nuclear reactor, which generates fissile material, but
less than it uses. In our case it would imply a machine,
which generates biological material out of biological
waste, but less than it uses.)

[164]

1 Long-term depression......
2 80 years ago the Sidonia was facing extinction. It was
a desperate war between the Sidonia and the Gaunas.
I think, this is the reason, why he...

3 You fought damned much.
4 You are tired............
I wish, I had realised it sooner...

5 Don't overdo it.
You've been several days in this tank.
6 I am ok, Raraa.

7 I am happy......
8 that you feel well again.

[165]

1 It is not a problem to generate growth.
2 I expect, that in 10 months it will be grown enough for a
brain transplantation.

3 But, is this really a good idea? I have manipulated the
genes as ordered,

4 and I just think, longevity generated only by medicine
like ours doesn't pass eternal youth to the descendants.
5 This replacement clone is made with Mr. Saito's manipulated
genes. Its eternal youth is inborn.

[166]

1 What's actually going on here?
2 Why has Hiroki taken Shinatose as hostage?
3 Chief in charge of the Guard Hiyama

4 Here are the voices from inside.

5 stszzzz
It is to early
He hasn't even five kilo.
6 That is a good weight to be born now

7 Kobayashi, don't say.....
8 ...you have let create a clone of Hiroki.
9 I heard, you have let the guy run around freely, Hiyama?

[167]

1 In order to take him out of the amniotic fluid
container, preparations must be made first.
When you open the container by force, we can't
put him inside again.
Enough. Open the cap.
2 wumm, crunch
3 I hate that !!

4 The door, how many longer?
5 A little bit

6 Had you the intention to keep him here inside
till he is an adult?
7 What kind of use would have a human like this?

8 I open the door now !
9 beep beep

0 tug tug

[168]

1 rabeeeehh

[169]

1 Hiroki !!!
2 You have taken the clone out of the amniotic fluid
container !?

3 Have you forgotten the oath of the crew?
Your life and your death is no longer your decision
alone.
4 Your experience and your knowledge is Sidonia's now.

5 15 years....or say 10 years is enough time
6 twitch twitch
7 All I know I shall teach to this child.

[170]

1 aaaaaaa
2 Your body is on its limits. Don't make it worse.
3 Put down your weapon.

4 So, the negotiations have failed?

5 .............................

[171]

1 That's useless. Useless.
2 Hiroki! Put down the sword !!

3 You kindly wait on my instructions.

4 This child is my child.
5 Do not interfere.

6 Be prepared !!

[172]
[173]

1 He 's fast.

[173]
[174]

Sign on the tube says: Old converter duct

1 raaaaa raaaa

2 Hiroki!! Run!!

[174]

1 Raraa

2 We don't have much time !!
3 Run !!

4 Deep inside of the Sidonia there are lot of old
converter ducts. Who enters there, is hardly to find.

5 That was the last time, Hiroki was seen.

[176]

Box Today
1 How you have grown....
2 Tasty?

3 Yes

4 Eeh, I was thinking earlier
5 if you are only with Nagate overly friendly.

6 eeh, ooh, is that so?
7 I again reminisced about the past and forgot
completely to turn on the brain.

[177]

box Research of alien life forms

1 She always stares in the same direction
and fixes the same point....
2 The placenta imitates Hoshijiro Suzuka...

The signs in the shower say (top to bottom)
a danger of suffocation
b zero gravity


3 as if she is searching for someone..
4 Right

text placenta Hoshijiro's line of vision

5 hmm
6 It is not the direction to the place, where
here family or Tanikaze Nagate lives..

[178]

1 Something is there and it is the storage space
of the kabizashis.
2 But.... why....
text Kabizashi storage space

box Kunato residence

1 This passage leads to a special feature
of the Sidonia.
2 It is time now, to inform Mr. Norio
about this.

3 "Kuna" in "Kunato" means "Don't come!!"
4 According to this the name "Kunato" has
the acceptance of keeping the devils away.

(Translator's note: Nori is a special
Japanese seagrass dish (Gracilaria verrucosa).
That maybe or maybe not for some interest
later in the ongoing story.)

[179]

1 This was protected by the Kunato family
for generations...

2 Ochiai's auxiliary memory.

End of Vol. 3 of Sidonia no kishi


Keiji

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On Wed, 14 Dec 2011 02:08:53 +0100, Keiji <inv...@invalid.invalid>
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==================================
Sidonia no Kishi 15
==================================




Vol 3 page 146 Japanese edition
2 ...the kabizashis were marooned in space
by the arbitrariness of the member of the
immortal crew Ochiai.

3 The Sidonia lost its sole defense weapon,
and Gaunas infiltrated the ship.

[149]

1 In the few minutes, which it took Saito
Hiroki to crush with his "Tsugumori" Mecha
4 These numbers...well, in the first generation
no one has to be in the parent's role. We all want
to do as best we can, but we are at war, how
shall we take care of so many people?

5 There is a minimum amount to create a stable
4 That shall let us hear the voices from inside.

5 stszzzz
It is to early
He hasn't even five kilo.
6 That is a good weight to be born now

7 Kobayashi, don't say.....
8 ...you have let create a clone of Hiroki.
9 I heard, you have let the guy run around freely, Hiyama?

[167]

1 In order to take him out of the amniotic fluid
container, preparations must be made first.
When you open the container by force, we can't
put him inside again.
Enough. Open the cap.
2 wumm, crunch
3 I hate that !!

4 The door, how long?
5 Just a little bit
1 raaaaaaaaabeeeeeeh

2 Hiroki!! Run!!

[174]

1 Raraa

2 We don't have much time !!
3 Run !!

4 Deep inside of the Sidonia there are lots of old
converter ducts. Who enters there, is hardly to find.

5 That was the last time, Hiroki was seen.

[176]

Box Today
1 You have grown....
2 Tasty?

3 Yes

4 Eeh, I was thinking earlier
5 if you are overly friendly only with Nagate.
4 Thus "Kunato" means as well "keep the devil at bay".

(Translator's note: Nori, as it is written in Kanji
in the story, is a special Japanese seagrass dish

Keiji

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On Wed, 14 Dec 2011 02:08:53 +0100, Keiji <inv...@invalid.invalid>
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==================================
Sidonia no Kishi 16
==================================

Sidonia no Kishi 16


vol 4 page 001 of the Japanese Edition

[001]

16th Story Shinatose Izana's baptism of fire

1 eee?? Kabizashi!!

2 Why is the Tsugimori equipped with a kabizashi?

3 You are now a spear wielder.

[002]

1 eee!? Mr. Sei !!
Why this outfit of yours?
2 There is a change in the personnel.
It was decided that I am assigned to the
Moritos starting today.

3 There was also a change, who is in this squad.
4 We are members of the same squadron,
squad leader Tanikaze Nagate.

5 sqsqsquad leader !!

6 Our goal is the extermination of the Gaunas.

[003]

1 What ever you say, there will be no change.

2 Do you really want to do this?
In the small mass association ship are 5000 Gaunas,
and in the ship 3 light years ahead are waiting much
more of them.

3 The ace will be, what is just in the making.
4 The probability to win is more than satisfying.

[004]

1 The bodies, which have been ejected from the
small mass association ship, sorry,
from "Ocarina" are identified as Gaunas.
2 Actually they are approaching the Sidonia with
high speed.
The number of bodies is unknown, but has to be high.
3 "Ocarina". What's that supposed to be?

4 Mass association ship 21. That's confusing. So I
made a nickname.
Have you ever looked at the data?
5 I am sorry, assistive commander Midorikawa.

6 The distance to the target has shrunk to 2000 km.
7 Each and every single machine of the Morito squads
prepare for attack.

8 Ok !!

[005]

1 We have vision of the enemy.

2 !!
3 A coupled group?

4 Continuous count of the enemy bodies
5 34,35,36,37....
boxes: Ga513 Ga514 Ga515 and so on
text: Gauna main body count
Gauna main body count

box Ga540
1 48!
2 The number of enemy Gaunas is the same
as the number of the deployed Moritos.

3 I expect that you destroy them with
zero causalities.
4 Big brother help us.

[006][007]

[008]

text in the left upper corner: Ga490
1 That's this Gauna!!
2 Enemy Ga490 "Hawk-moth"confirmed
by image.

3 She came....

4 Hoshijiro....

5 Attack!!

(Translator's explanation: The kanji, which
the author has chosen for "Hawk-moth", is
read as "Benisuzume".There are two animals,
which go by this name. One is the Red Avadavat
or Strawberry Finch (Amandava amandava),
and the other is the Elephant Hawk-moth
(Deilephila elpenor). Even if the male
Strawberry Finch looks more like the
Placenta Morito-Hoshijiro Ga490 in the
coloured drawings, the author has used the
kanji for the moth. So I go with the moth,
but shorten it to Hawk-moth.)

[009]

1 Why that? I haven't asked for it!

2 You are talented as no one else has been
talented before.

4 Beep
4 I don't like it.
6 Sorry, but there is nothing, I can do.

7 puuu puuu

text on smartphone:
Tanikaze Nagate
absent
current location
Alienlifeformresearch

[010]

box: Research of alien life forms

1 Well, sometimes I think, in truth the
Gaunas want to make friends with the
humans,

2 but the mutual diversity is too great,
so they don't know, how to do it. Maybe.

3 ahhhhhhhhhhhhh....aa......

[011]

1 Tahiro, imagine,
2 when a Gauna with its placenta not only
let the human body reappear but also the
complete individual memory content in
identical form,
3 what makes the difference between the
reconstructed placenta-being and the
original human?
4 Scientifically seen there is probably no
difference between the self of the
reconstructed placenta-being, and the
original human.

5 But in my function as a member of the
Sidonia I can't support that view.

[012]

1 aa... Izana

2 Nagate
3 today I was assigned as regular pilot.

4 So..
5 Congratulation!

6 That's nothing to felicitate.

7 He?

8 The time, we spend together, goes
continuously towards zero.

[013]

1 Ehaha

2 The probability that a Morito pilot
returns from a mission alive is less
than 50%. At the first deployment
likely much lower.
3 ...............
Nagate, you have been again, where this
placenta is?

4 Heh? I was asked by the research
for alien life forms and...

5 Enough.

6 Hey, wait a moment, Izana
7 Don't come!

[014]
[015]

1 Our time hasn't got to zero already.

[016]

box: Verisimilar position of the Higgs drive
text: Ga503

1 Ga503 detonation caused by Higgs interference
2 Main body is exposed.

3 Roger!
4 This is Tanikaze: One main body crushed.

[017]

1 Unit 704 Tanikaze has crushed his 19th body.
text: 704 Tanikaze Unit

2 Superb, Mr. Sei.
3 What are you talking, you showed it to us.

4 This is Shinki squad: One body crushed.
5 Neat.
Sei's tactic is having effect on Gaunas,
which imitate a Morito (Mecha).
6 With a minimum on output we can remove the
placenta with a Higgs interference explosion.
Aim at the enemy's Higgs particle cannon!!

text on screen: Morito | Gauna
38/48 | 13/48
7 There are 13 Gaunas left.

8 Feruto and Shimoda retreat!
9 Kunato retrieve kabizashi no. 7!
Tanikaze squad turn to support the Beta squad!

[018]

text left upper corner: Ga490
1 Ga490 Hawk-moth
2 approaches the Beta squad.

[19]

1 This is Hoshijiro. One Morito crushed.

2 She aims at unit 211!

3 waaaah

4 Hoshijiro!!

5 Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
6 Stop it, Hoshijiro !!

(Translator's explanation: The Placenta-Morito-
Hoshijiro announces the successful crush of an
enemy, as the Morito pilots do. But she can't
speak properly. The author expressed that by
using a Japanese alphabet, which is used for
loanwords.)

[20]

1 Sto stop it

2 Hoshijiro!!
3 I beg you

4 brzzz

5 She stopped the hand!
6 Hoshijiro, it's me, the Tanikaze

[21]

1 Shoot her, Tanikaze!!!

2 !!

3 Shit

[22]

1 Lost her...

2 I am sorry!!

3 It's okay.
4 That was a mistake. Perhaps on my part.

[23]

1 This Nagate guy really is something. He
crushed alone 19 Gaunas.
2 I have the feeling, we are able to
defeat the Ocarina

3 Looks as it is not longer our turn.
A first mission without causalities.

[24]

1 To defense squad 5
2 In short damaged moritos will return.
Please take care of them.

3 Ok
4 Ok
OK

5 Unit 087. Large intrusion of placenta.
Intensified cleaning necessary.

6 Unit 087 please reduce your speed.
7 Unit 087 please answer.

8 Unit 087? That's probably a mistake?
9 ee

[025]

text: Morito
087 Unit
destroyed
pilot uncertain
1 Unit 087 has been seriously damaged
and the pilot deceased.

[026]
[027]

1 Official warning: Vibration alert
2 Official warning: Vibration alert

3 achaaaaaaaa

[028]

1 Part of ice layer lost!!
Damage at the ship's hull!!
What's going on!?

2 Signals of the damaged units have vanished!!
All units have been destroyed!!

3 ha
4 ee
5 ha

6 Defense squad 3, are you safe!!
Defense unit 723 half damaged!
Unit 721 destroyed!!
At the unit, which emits signals of the
fuselage of Unit 087, raising placenta
activity detected!!

[029]

1 Maseru !!

2 Thththat's...

[030]

1 Unit 087 is in truth a Gauna!!
2 That is the Hawk-moth.
text left upper corner: Ga490

3 Izana, run !!
Hurry !!

4 All defense squads intercept the intruder
as of now.

5 ok
6 ok
screen: Ga490

[031]

1 hah hah
2 hah hah
3 ...at this distance
hah hah

text on screen:
wired in the flight supply Higgs particle
launcher
automatic compensation device feedback
negative
circuit error no. 112 reason unknown

4 hah hah

5 Izana!!

6 click

[032]

1 click click


[033]

End of 16th story

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Sidonia no kishi 17 (first arc, draft)
======================================



vol 4 page 035 Japanese Edition

[035]

17th story Tanikaze Nagate's decision

Visual motifs of the Sidonia # 13 Surroundings of the central tower

[036]

1 pessn

text on screen:
wired in the flight supply Higgs particle
launcher
Higgs particle
no supply

[037]
[038]
[039]

1 Unit 723, are you ok?
2 Iez.
3 Hawk-moth flies to the mineral resources pile
4 It intends to fly into the digging gallery.
Don't let it go away.
text left upper corner: Ga490

(Translator's explanation: The answer "Iez" means
"Yes". The author has written it in the same way,
as he writes, when the Hawk-moth speaks. So it
is a sign, that this answer may be not of the origin,
which the Sidiona believes. I tried to express this.)

[040]

box: Battlefield 2000 km away from the Sidonia
1 This is Tanikaze squad. We have crushed the
last Gauna.

2 Fine. Come back to the ship immediately,
and take part in the operations to eliminate
the intruder.

3 Ok!

4 Tanikaze, there is no need for you to come back.
5 As Hawk-moth is the opponent, your behaviour
is a problem.

6 Take part of Kunato's kabizashi retrieve actions.
7 Understood, captain.

[041]

1 There is the Hawk-moth

2 Direct hit!!

[042]

1 Bullshit, it's still moving.

2 There is the Hawk-moth!!

3 Done....!!?
4 What's that!?

[043]

1 Gone that way
2 There. This one is an imitation.

3 That's a dummy, too
4 Where is it hiding?
5 Its amount of placenta is limited. Let's corner it.

6 I think, the enemy's intention is to make it
into the ship.
Squad 7 to 10 protect the place, where the
ice layer is lost.
7 Ok.

text: east 4

8 Unit 723 wait there till further instructions.
As soon as the situation is cleared, we open the
hatch.

[044]

1 ee

[045]

1 Unit 723 placenta penetration alert.
Rear Higgs machine damaged
Pilot, please abandon unit
2 Hawk-moth is in front of the hatch east 4
3 What?

4 Izana!!

[046]

1 aa hah
2 Na Na...ga...
reversed left to right text on screen:
painkiller forced infusion

[047]

1 uaaaaaaaaaa

2 tani......kaze.....

[048]

text:
704 unit 723 Unit
Ga490 destroyed

[049]

1 Through the placenta right into the main body....
A precise stab into the centre of gravity
to make the Gauna temporarily unable to move.
Only Hiroki has mastered this technique....

[050]

1 You are not Hoshijiro. You are not even
human.

[051]
[052]

1 Minor damages at the Tsugimori. Pilot safe
and sound.
2 Hawk-moth flees towards beyond Sidonia's
perimeter of defense.
text on screen: Ga490

3 Go after it!!

4 Pursuit is not needed.
End of the military operations.

[053]

1 If this had been a type 18, it probably
would have been vaporised.
2 Kunato Design and Development has wrongly
omitted the anti-Higgs-beam-coating,
because they considered it as inexpedient.

3 kank
4 kank
5 donk
6 kank
7 sorry

[054]

1 Nagate...

2 Izana !!
3 I though you were dead........

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(maybe continued sometimes)

Keiji

ungelesen,
22.12.2011, 05:47:5722.12.11
an
On Wed, 14 Dec 2011 02:08:53 +0100, Keiji <inv...@invalid.invalid>
wrote:

>Test! Ignore!
>
>This is a test for my private use only. Do not open or read it. Don't
>download it. If you have accidentally downloaded it, delete it
>immediately.
>
>I am not responsible for any violations of your local laws. You have
>been warned.



SnK 14-16 + 17 first arc.draft v7

Made some minor changes.

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Sidonia no Kishi 14

=====================================

vol3 chap14 page 111 of the Japanese edition

The immortal ship's committee


Visual motif of the Sidonia #11: Secret Passage in the pilot quarters



[112]

1 I am sorry, Raraa, as a gentleman I shouldn't let a girl carry such
heavy equipment.
2 Hey, you know, I don't like it to be called by my given name.
3 If you do that again, I pull your neck long.
4 You are cute, Raraa

[113]

1 Grrrrr
2 Kobayashi...
3 Don't pull such a face. It's a simple investigation mission.
Collecting raw material is
much more dangerous.
4 Besides that, this is a chance, to carve our names into the history
books.
5 But it is a construction of unknown origin with lateral length of
several kilometres.
3 we keep the course to the centre.
3 That has to be the centre.
4 Probably is the centre connected to all holes. If we are cleverly,
we may escape. Retreat!

[136]

1 What's that?
2 Shining grains?

[137]
[138]
[139]

1 These grains!
2 They pierced the main body of the Gauna.

[140]

1 That's how we became heros, because we were the first humans on the
2 Now I have run superglue into the joint
3 What a scream... a monster?
4 I am sorry, Mrs. Hiyama.


End of chapter 14



================================

Sidonia no Kishi 14

==================================



immortal borad Ochiai.

3 The Sidonia lost its sole defense weapon,
and Gaunas infiltrated the ship.

[149]

1 In the few minutes, which it took Saito
Hiroki to crush with his "Tsugumori" Mecha
the two Gaunas, which have invaded the ship...

2 ...99 % of the inhabitants of the Sidonia
were devoured.

[150]

box Bridge of the Sidonia
meeting room in the ship's shell

1 Captain....

[151]

1 We finished the rescue of the last survivors.

2 24 members of the immortal ship's committee and
392 ordinary sailors...
3 ...that's the complete population of the
Sidonia now.

4 The ship's committee is 25 persons
after she became a member of the immortal ship's committee.
3 Have you forgotten the oath of the ship's committee?
box Research of space life
================================

Sidonia no Kishi 16
Spaceliferesearch

[010]

box: Research of Space life
for sapce life and...
========================================

Sidonia no Kishi 17


=======================================
3 I though you are dead........








[055]

1 Ah, Mr. Ochiai, long time no see.
2 Aren't you very busy? I am happy.
3 Thank you.

4 The captain is waiting.

5 Excuse me!
6 I am sorry that I am late.

7 I am relentless with those, which don't
respect time and instructions.
8 Don't do that again.

9 I am sorry!

[056]

1 Hero !?

2 Yes. In the past there was a very
powerful man on the Sidonia, who
saved the Sidonia in many crisis...

3 Now again we are facing a big crisis.
4 The small mass association ship Ocarina...
On top of that is in the space three
light years ahead a gigantic mass
association ship waiting for us.

4 100.000 disarmament bigots have ask to
emigrate to the Remu star system, and
this is now being carried out.
5 They think, always to go nicely out of
the gaze of the Gauna is the one and
only way for mankind to survive.

6 But there is a more plainly and safer
way to eliminate the danger of the Gaunas.
7 The Annihilation of all Gaunas, which are in
the way of the Sidonia.

[057]

1 Therefor is the support of the new hero
necessary.
2 I want your help.

3 ..........
4 eh, eh..


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